Release

Hold onto life, my little leaf,
in spite of pain,
in spite of grief;
and, when the wild winds rape the bough
till trembling more than now,
you almost lose your grip:
hold yet to life.

Hold onto life, though brittle brown,
remains alone of life’s fair gown;
for Spring must come again, I know
and warm your roots ‘neath melting snow;
you cannot give up now:
hold still to life.

Hold onto life, through life seems past,
and though the lots have all been cast;
for somewhere Summer walks in green
and somewhere Love crowns her queen
who knew him not below:
hold on, then, go.

© 1987, Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Austin Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Your leaf's last conscious revelation is charming. Never thought of it in this way. Congrats. Love, daver
A  Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 2:37 AM
Nice win....Love ~SKAT
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June 17, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Faye.... Congratulations:) Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest... Stop by and enjoy my newest poem "Mr President" OR my fresh blog "NOT ENOUGH" if you want or have time. :):):) Hugs & Love ~~ LINDA ~~
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:35 AM
Written from your heart and straight into ours Faye. my thoughts are with you I am so pleased you have joined and found a channel for your inner thoughts. Hugs Jan x
Bateson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 12:10 PM
I read all your poetry and was overwhelmed as I too have lost a son, my first born. Feelings come through your words and straight to my heart. Welcome to the soup you will be on my favorite poet list for sure.
Gibson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Thank you. Only those who have lost a child can understand.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 8:56 AM
A beautiful crafted poem!!! Love the emotion I gained from reading this..Welcome to Poetry Soup!
Gibson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 4:00 PM
Thank you. I do feel welcome.
Guzzi Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Very charming and you have some nice meter going in there too! Light & Love
Gibson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Thanks...makes me brave enough to keep doing this.
Macmillan Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 7:38 AM
WOW! And I mean wow! I don't wow poems often and usually if I find a few lines to commend, I do. Your entire poem shimmers... profoundly... reminds me of Elizabeth Barrett Browning, though not a sonnet. It is a wondrous thing when a poet can take raw emotion and create something that reads as literature. You have done this. Thanks to Tim for the invite. I'm working on a novel while mothering an almost five year old, I love soup but have little time... I hope to visit often. Welcome to soup!
Gibson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Thank you so much! Love to write but, like you, have to steal time to do it.
Ryerson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 5:49 AM
Many thanks to Seren, Chris and Francine...
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Was a lovely poem to read, just so sorry that a tragedy caused you to write it....Seren
Gibson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Thank you!
Roberts Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:41 PM
this is a beautifully penned piece, reminds me of the writing of our own wonderful Elizabeth Wesley's work, has the same musical flow to it
Gibson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Thank you. Hope to make Tim proud.
Macmillan Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 7:41 AM
YES! I once compared Lizzy's work to EBB as well. It is because of passion being tempered by poetic insight, difficult mix. Few truly have that natural way to take rhyme and make it feel "organic, wholly natural." Hi Hon! Hope you are well!
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