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Relaxation

when the sun begins to fall and the children are settling down i pour myself a captain and dew grab my poetry bag and notebook slip out the back door cuddle in a lounge chair under the summer stars look up in the sky and picture my thoughts listening to the nights animals and the cars, trucks and motorcycles leaving the bar across the street the laughter of a drunk on the patio having a smoke i myself light a swisher sweet watching my trail filter off into the air leaving all my worries behind then i begin to write that's my relaxation! 6.14.12 karen croft

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Date: 6/29/2012 11:45:00 AM
Karen congrats on your win, well written..David
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Date: 6/27/2012 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Karen. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2012 6:00:00 AM
How relaxing and a lovely write, congratulations Karen xx
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Date: 6/26/2012 5:55:00 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Karen. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2012 1:53:00 PM
This is a wonderful write of relaxation! I wish I could be so lucky as to have an outlet like that to go and relax at! Enjoyed your poem! Great Work!!
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