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My loved ones gone
visit dreams of
cyan fields and
pixie cloud skies.
Is it a cruel trick
of the mind?
Or moments, out
of space and time;
caught in the weft
of our corduroy lives;
a small gift granted
to our past or
future selves?
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June 18, 2025 at 2:50 PM
wow, this is an amazing poem and one with which I can relate. I especially liked: Or moments, out of space and time; caught in the weft of our corduroy lives; 'corduroy lives' is brilliant! yellow rose
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