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Rejected Heart

rejected heart

jagged memories
cut up dreams into tatters ~
a rejected heart weeps

11/9/20

griefheartheartbrokenhurtsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2020 6:18:00 PM

way to go with your senryu, Sam. Well done and congratulations.

JCB Brul

Date: 11/12/2020 10:40:00 PM

Very expressive senryu..Congratulations dear Sam...This piece resonates with most of us.Splendid!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/12/2020 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations Sam on your win, a very emotional write but beautiful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 11/11/2020 11:57:00 PM

so sad dear Sam, but many congratulations on your win with your beautiful Senryu ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

John Watt

Date: 11/11/2020 9:18:00 PM

Back to congratulate you for your win - not rejected! Bushels to you, friend

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/11/2020 7:57:00 PM

A moving, descriptive WINNING poem, Sam. Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/11/2020 6:59:00 PM

Sad one.

Carol Mitra

Date: 11/11/2020 6:50:00 PM

Amazing piece Sam....really liked the piece...Congrats on yoir win :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/11/2020 3:39:00 PM

Very lovely write Sam. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/11/2020 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations, Sam, on your win for this sad but vivid, poetic piece!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2020 5:26:00 PM

Aw, I can feel the pain, Sam. ~ Healing and Happiness, Gershon

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/11/2020 11:38:00 AM

Thank you dear friend! There is so much grief in rejection. It leaves a permanent mark. Sending you happiness and harvest blessings!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 11/9/2020 8:43:00 PM

Sad but so very true, many women can relate to this. All the best for contest. Rama

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/11/2020 11:45:00 AM

Agreed my friend! Thank you for your best wishes for the contest. So appreciated.

John Watt

Date: 11/9/2020 4:55:00 PM

This cuts right to the core of the heartrending pain of rejection. Well-worded; starting with 'jagged' is so effective at setting the tone, like a page ripped out of a book. I hope you are entering this in Brian's contest, I think it's a winner. Warmly ~ John

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/11/2020 11:44:00 AM

Thank you my friend! Love your simile - "like a page ripped out of a book!" Wish I'd thought of that one. I did enter it. Thank you! Somehow we can never replace that page and there is always that empty, sad, melancholy space that rejection leaves in us with a resounding "why?." Bushels of blessings to you my friend.

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