Reincarnation

You offered me a kingdom,
I traveled no further than a
garden I was given to till and
attend; was that first fruit of 
your blessed soil, or were my 
blossoms on the wrong end? 
That apple I bit into, far from 
the mansion on the hill, they 
were my eyes, my hands that 
held the fruit, it was entirely 
my will.
   
   That apple so firm and round...

the flesh, so red, the juice so sweet:

coils of ever greater desire wound
round my hands and feet – I have 
revisited those circles, taut springs 
and gears of hissing, squeaking time. 

Like the burgundy of the grape, the press 
of the vine, now there were seasons, 

light and dark from which to harvest,

absent the hearts, my cultivations
of outer-rind. What is our Sign? 
Born in the beginning...searching 
an infinite Universe...all lost and
all mine.

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Date: 7/5/2022 10:01:00 PM
Hello enjoyed this open ended thoughtful Exploration, In this type of write going on What we know, in the limited form we are' We can get so many things wrong.) Yet If we are open to God's inspiration? there Is the Oppertunity to grow in our faith Also, this strikes a chord with me.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/6/2022 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Joe; so pleased you enjoyed the read. Maybe together, you, I, and other sincere seekers, will share and come to some agreed upon semblances of evasive truth. Blessings my friend. Have a great week!
Date: 6/26/2022 4:14:00 AM
Thought provoking my friend Joe. especially your last verse. Im so glad we have discovered each others poetry over an OUZO at a Greek dinner party. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/26/2022 7:55:00 PM
Love OUZO, my favorite drink. Such a delightful comment...blessings!
Date: 6/23/2022 12:00:00 AM
Profound poetry, my friend. Such symbolism!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/23/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea; so pleased that you like this one. Have a great day!
Date: 6/18/2022 6:35:00 AM
these lines produce profound images and the wander thru the meandering mind is fascinating..."Like the burgundy of the grape, the press of the vine, now there were seasons" outstanding...love the depth this produces...staring at the abyss at times...great job Joe
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/18/2022 7:24:00 AM
take the lesson from Byron, Mad, Bad, and Dangerous
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/18/2022 7:09:00 AM
"fame and money are easy, grab a guitar, no deep metaphors, no mythology, no logic and reasoning, and keep it simple stoopid...it is that easy"~Ain't that the truth:) Thank you, Ray. You made my day. Blessings!
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/18/2022 6:54:00 AM
i know this feeling but like Byron's first attempt he met with a tempest of criticism....we have forgotten those critics but Byron is only passed by Shakespeare as Europe's most popular bard.our greatest pleasure is writing, our smugness is that Byron was never subjected to in his taverns, that is me on the jukebox...fame and money are easy, grab a guitar, no deep metaphors, no mythology, no logic and reasoning, and keep it simple stoopid...it is that easy
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/18/2022 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, Ray; this poem was getting lonely for a comment. Again you have made my day by leaving such an encouraging, heartfelt remark. Blessings my friend!
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