Regrets

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I return each year to make my peace I wade through quilts of grass and stone Beside the mounds, of cold damp earth And pray it's true.......that angels hear Will gather 'round to listen, now I need to know that somewhere there is someone close, to feel my breath To hear the words I've left unsaid or accolades I should have shared But words, too late, I've kept unspoken inaudible, are broken tears and with regret, I will come to spread transparent words around I should have sung them long ago Toss them like leaves, so you would know to catch them like the leaves of fall... And gently you would gather them to keep them for your heart to own Through the years I've held regret From things suppressed that froze my tongue And with regret, words linger yet, Still hovering to weigh me down
--------------------------- For Catie's Contest: "No More Masks" Inspired by a poem by Angelina W. Grimke The Eyes of My Regret Always at dusk, the same tearless experience, The same dragging of feet up the same well-worn path To the same well-worn rock; The same crimson or gold dropping away of the sun The same tints, - rose, saffron, violet, lavender, grey Meeting, mingling, mixing mistily; Before me the same blue black cedar rising jaggedly to a point; Over it, the same slow unlidding of twin stars, Two eyes, unfathomable, soul-searing, Watching, watching, watching me; The same two eyes that draw me forth, against my will dusk after dusk; The same two eyes that keep me sitting late into the night, chin on knees Keep me there lonely, rigid, tearless, numbly miserable - The eyes of my Regret.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/14/2016 6:22:00 PM
Hi, Carrie, I know this all-too-well. I wrote one with a very similar theme posted July 13th, 2006. Your writing..as always...is amazing.
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:12:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 2:32:00 PM
Very beautiful, yet sad, Carrie. However, your words echo the feelings we all are faced with at times...too little too late...like my mom called to heaven at age 54...so much left unsaid. Congratulations on your podium win!
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Date: 10/2/2015 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Sandra. I lost my own mother when she was 46, I wish I could have said the things that have been in my heart all these years.
Date: 10/1/2015 5:09:00 PM
Simply beautiful. I am not familiar with this poem but if there is no name for both, I'd say yours inspired her write, and I'd say that without batting an eyelash! Congrats, Carrie!
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Date: 8/27/2015 7:58:00 PM
WOW, Carrie.... The poem's powerful, your poem and the poem in which inspired your write. I know regret like no other. Sadly, some of us (like me) chose to live with the regrets. However, I think sometimes we are afraid to cry over some regrets. Because, to regret one thing, means to find regret in everything connected to that one regret. Anyways, I'm just babbling here.. I'm also here, to ask you something... Sending 2 soup mail... WUV ~LINDA~
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