Regret

rose bloom set afire flame offense chars love most dire fray'd woe fuels grief pyre

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Bill Baker

Date: 12/11/2023 3:28:00 PM

Well written with great imagery, Arlo. Write On! Bill

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/11/2023 6:27:00 PM

Thx 4 stopping by, T.B. :o)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/4/2023 2:17:00 PM

Very well written Arlo! I love it :)

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/4/2023 8:18:00 PM

Many thx , Heidi. Be well. :o)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 4:51:00 PM

outstanding and vivid words, Arlo. I'm assuming 'rose bloom' is a reference to a love that 'charred' and fueled the grief pyre?...liked 'grief pyre. Nicely done, Arlo. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/4/2023 12:57:00 PM

You are unfortunately correct, Sara. Distant past. :o)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/3/2023 12:15:00 PM

Dear Arlo, within your vivid verse I find such sad beauty.. and I adore the use of the word "char". Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/3/2023 5:42:00 PM

Indeed, my friend.. unfortunately

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/3/2023 3:47:00 PM

Always great when you stop by, Susan. Heartbreak kinda like burning a great ribeye to "charcoal"! Take good care. :o)

Silent One

Date: 12/3/2023 3:06:00 AM

An excellent arrangement of words Arlo...

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/3/2023 8:24:00 AM

Struggled. Arrangement is a sage depiction. Thx 4 visit, S1. ;o/