Refuge From Deluge

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Driving a desert road
touring the landscape
discovering a new world

Overwhelmed by the sight of
rocky gorges and sheer plateaus
striking with bands of white, yellow, orange, and red
fading in a blur of shimmering heat

A brilliant strobe of light flickered
lightning flared up in the clouds
the roar of kettledrums struck
followed a couple of heartbeats afterwards

The roar jolted me out of my seat
Without warning clouds start rolling in
opening up with pounding rain
zero visibility, where to pull over

F-L-A-S-H-F-L-O-O-D!

Refuge from the deluge

 

8/30/2016

A Deluge - Poetry Contest  
 Sponsored by: Julia Ward  

True story, about 12 years ago in  Arizona  on monsoon season, another reason I hate thunder……

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/8/2016 12:08:00 PM
Ah, perfect in its delivery of feelings. I've been there during this period and you have nailed. Bravo Poet! ––))
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/8/2016 12:45:00 PM
Thank you, Dah, for the inspiration. This was at the time I was younger and visited my niece in Arizona. I am a big coward anyway I just wanted to crawl into a hole until it was all over...
Date: 9/6/2016 4:09:00 AM
Well described deluge:)
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. :) Hugs
Date: 9/2/2016 11:32:00 AM
Greatly enjoyed Eve...best of luck...god bless...^WW^
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for your support, ^WW^. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/2/2016 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful images ... a joy to read ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thank you, Probir. Hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you, Probir, I just hope she enjoys it. Hugs
Date: 9/1/2016 2:29:00 AM
Excellent write with wonderful imagery. Lovely picture. Thanks fro sharing it.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/1/2016 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi.
Date: 8/31/2016 3:19:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your write Mrs Eve. I have witnessed many myself. Good luck in contest!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/31/2016 3:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel, I need more friends like you Hugs Eve
Date: 8/31/2016 5:01:00 AM
That must've been very scary. Sometimes thunder booms so loudly that it vibrates the furniture. Mountain flash floods are dangerously quick. Good telling of your true story, Eve...hugs!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/31/2016 3:35:00 PM
thank you, dear friend..... and I am one big coward....
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