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Refuge

The journey was long, tired he was. Lights everywhere, he arrived where he wanted to One way ticket and a suitcase full of illusions. Other start, other mountain to climb. He arrived to a station, he dreamt of a new line to write on. Soon a job he started, happy as a pig in muck. New lover amazed his heart. As a shining cowboy in a rodeo, he kept standing on. Day after day he has been successful, nobody knows. Melancholy was a shadow always behind him. His lover was a butteefly feeding from all the flowers. His friends were leeches feeding on his blood. His refuge became a bunker, his heart an empty space, his dreams a nightmare. Lying in bed with the blinds down, with black clouds on his mind, only himself on his refuge. One day he opened the blinds and he saw a little bird standing on the balcony singing. That little bird's song touch his soul, his heart, his whole mind. He got up full of music right to be played. Another begining to look for, the same refuge he came from: his hometown, his friends, his forever family, his nest where he comes back for refuge.

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Date: 4/8/2023 10:53:00 AM
Ah Maria Can one ever go back? A lovely write. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/8/2023 11:06:00 AM
Hi Linda. Sometimes it would be nice to go back. The sweet chilhood, no worries, just play around. Thanks a lot. Have a nice day.
Date: 4/7/2023 1:07:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Maria :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/7/2023 2:49:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sunshine. Nice you like it. Hugs. Have a lovely weekend
Date: 4/6/2023 9:19:00 PM
"Another begining to look for, the same refuge he came from: his hometown, his friends, his forever family, his nest where he comes back for refuge" - A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/7/2023 12:28:00 AM
Hello, how are you? Thank you so much. Yes, our refuge it's where we belong. I think. Have a nice day Christuraj.
Date: 4/6/2023 8:38:00 PM
Maria, thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/7/2023 12:29:00 AM
Hi Constance. Thank you again. Have a nice day and Enjoy Easter time.

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