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I rode across the arid desert dunes Until I came to her oasis Where greedily I drank From the deep emerald pools of her eyes. ---------------------------------------------- Author: Paul Callus ~ 13th June 2015 Contest: Through Your Eyes Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Visual 3 ~ 25 words Placed 4th

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win , beautiful write hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thank you, Eve! Glad you enjoyed. Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2015 9:27:00 PM

SO glad this placed>it was one of my favorites. Congrats.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/24/2015 6:41:00 AM

Thank both ended in a tie:) // paul

David Mohn

Date: 6/22/2015 9:32:00 PM

Vexing eyes, quite nicely captured Paul...congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 6/23/2015 11:01:00 AM

Thank you David. Enjoyed your high-flying entry, too. All the best. // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/22/2015 5:54:00 PM

Paul, this is beautiful.Congratulations on your win:) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 6/23/2015 11:02:00 AM

I am pleased that you found beauty in these few lines, Alexis. Thank you:) // paul

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2015 4:37:00 PM

Paul:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2015 4:52:00 PM

Many thanks and hugs, Skat:) // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2015 3:46:00 PM

Amazing win... LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2015 4:52:00 PM

Thank you for the amazing comment, Linda:) [I heard rumors of skirmishes on the western front:( (?)] hugs // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/22/2015 12:06:00 PM

Excellent interpretation of this visual, Paul! Congrats on your well deserved win!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2015 3:40:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Laura. Thank you for the lovely comments. // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/22/2015 2:45:00 AM

nicely captured Paul congrats on placing hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2015 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Shadow. Have a lovely week. // paul

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/21/2015 9:04:00 PM

lovely piece, congrats on your win

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2015 10:59:00 AM

Glad you liked, Francine; thank you. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2015 3:30:00 PM

I'm mesmerised - the eyes have it Paul! LOVE the imagery here many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 6/21/2015 5:16:00 PM

Once again you are the bearer of good news, Jan:)) Being mesmerized is very complimentary...Thank you! Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/17/2015 6:02:00 PM

OH OH OH OH!!!!! OH OH OH OH!!!! OH OH OH OH!! Dear me. Dear me. Straight to my favs....I can't praise this enough. LOVE IT. Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 6:47:00 AM

Now I'm lost for words, Eileen!!! Your reaction is so Oh Oh OH Oh!!! I am so pleased that you clicked on the 'like' button:) Thank you!!! Your fav means a lot to me! Emerald IS a lovely colour, no! Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 6:03:00 PM

Emerald, eh? Hmmmmmmm....now you have me guessing.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2015 4:59:00 PM

mesmerizing poem, good luck on the contest.. enjoyed:), luv... p.d.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/17/2015 5:28:00 PM

"Mesmerizing poem"...mesmerizing eyes...and lovely comment:) Thank you for stopping by Linda. [loved your last love letter poem; looking forward to a welcome back one!] hugs // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 6/15/2015 11:33:00 AM

Another excellent one Paul,goodluck in the contest...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2015 3:29:00 PM

It is good to see you posting again,Kayod5! Thank you for the lovely comments. Keep well and active my friend. // paul

Laura Hay

Date: 6/15/2015 10:27:00 AM

Superb Paul! Good luck in the contest! Kind Rgds, Laura

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Laura; so pleased that you enjoyed this short poem! Have a lovely week. // paul

Constance La France

Date: 6/15/2015 7:48:00 AM

Paul, wonderfully written for the contest, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, summer memory

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2015 3:24:00 PM

Your comments and high rating are very encouraging, Constance:) Thank you:) hugs // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/15/2015 2:29:00 AM

This write is very brilliant Paul I love I, thanks for shared.......A.M.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2015 3:22:00 PM

Your brilliant comments are appreciated, Afolabi. Thank you for a pleasant visit. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2015 1:32:00 AM

those were Gorgeous eyes too, weren't they? Love your entry!!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 5:44:00 AM

Yes, they are, Andrea! I suppose I'm a sucker for eyes; glad you enjoyed:) // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/13/2015 11:45:00 PM

Excellent! Not sure what else to say, can't see how it could be any better. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 5:42:00 AM

Your excellent is more than enough, Barbara:) Thank you!! // paul

David Meade

Date: 6/13/2015 11:07:00 PM

Ah, yes the eyes will do it every time! A refreshing drink for the heart! Well done my friend, 7

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 5:23:00 AM

Those eyes know how to play the game, David!! They temp me every time...and I just can't resist:) All the best. // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/13/2015 11:06:00 PM

I almost wish I was a woman thats so good! A7

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 5:21:00 AM

Ah Arthur, you can't have the best of both worlds...or can you?:)) Thanks for stopping by...and the high rating. // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/13/2015 7:03:00 PM

This is very good, very good my friend. Good luck in the contest. A7 from me..

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 5:19:00 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, Robert. Hope you're having a nice weekend. // paul