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Reflection-s on Childhood Day-s Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick 

Reflections On My Childhood In The Hospital - SK

Pain creeped in with the early hours of the morning, I was doubled over in pain. As I was screaming, my dad was wrapping me in a blanket. Off to the hospital he sped, then carrying me through the big doors. My appendix was about to burst open, emergency surgery was for me.
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Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2026 at 5:46 AM
I was delighted to see your name on my winners' list. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sorry I am so late at saying my congrats, I have been under the weather since Wednesday. Sara K. 👏✍️
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 10:08 AM
"Thank You" for your comment. Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Hope you are feeling better. I enjoyed writing this one for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it/for my placement. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
George Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 4:51 AM
By the timely intervention of your father, you were rescued from the mouth of great danger. The bursting of appendix can turn fatal. We have to understand that God has a plan behind everything. He wished you to become a poet. Congratulations on your first place win.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 2:04 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Hope you are having a great day. Yes, God has been behind everything in my life. I am blessed. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 4:53 PM
Oh...what a scary experience, Paula! But we forget all sufferings when we are with mom and dad!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 2:04 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. Hope you are having a great day. Yes, it was scary as a very young child. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:41 AM
"1 Place" ~ "Reflections On My Childhood In The Hospital." ~ Date Written:9/16/2026 ~ Written by Human Poet..........
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:25 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:41 AM
"Thank You" for your comment. Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Hope you are having a great day. Hugs... Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away...............
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 10:57 AM
- A frightening childhood experience, Paula – When I was a child, parents weren't allowed to stay with their child in the hospital... fortunately, that’s not the case today – Great writing :) – Best of luck in the contest :) – hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:38 AM
"Thank You" for your comment. Also Thanks for your, Best of luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. So true, parents were Not allowed to stay. I did Not see them until the next day. My day brought a corsage of flowers, then pinned it on my pillow to enjoy.  Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Anaya Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 10:06 AM
You're braveness, only a meer child , & already feels the excruciating thing called pain😢. Great ✍️, Paula & Best of luck👌 Autumn 🍂 blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 1:24 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. Also Thanks for your, Best of luck. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Williams Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:29 PM
Paula, thanks for sharing a tough experience which you (thanks to God, and your father) helped you to get through. Best wishes in Sara's contest. Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 1:23 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. Also Thanks for your, Best wishes in Sara's contest. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Narain Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 11:16 AM
Memorable moments in life. Nice to recall it.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 1:23 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Great memories are the best kind to have at any age. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Sharma  Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 8:41 AM
Oh gosh! That was a very close one! Sigh! I'm relieved that you were taken care of, dear Paula, having family in such times is really a blessing.. and even though it's never easy going through health crisis, it really gives emotional strength, I'm sorry you had to go through that, it just have been immensely painful. I too, have had some life threatening circumstances twice ~ sigh, life is not that easy! We just steer through! sending you hugsz and soothing starsz 🧜‍♀️🌊💫🍂🍁
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 1:22 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 4:47 PM
oh my! what a memory!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 1:22 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Great memories are the best kind to have at any age. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Trifiatis Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 8:36 AM
These dramatic events in our lives are what make us strong and wise. A powerful, agonizing description of a painful event, but also the presence of care and love in the face of your father. 💕
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 12:16 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard/painful as a very young child.  Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Singh Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 1:02 AM
A poerful and touching reflection.You capture both pain and the love so clearly-especially your dad wrapping you in a blanket and carrying you through the doors.Very heartfelt,,thank you for sharing this.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 12:15 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Glad you found this to be, Very heartfelt. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Ray Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 5:59 PM
a welcomed outcome, glad we are still blessed with you
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 12:13 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 4:53 PM
You are lucky and we are too! Best warmest wishes & prayers! Have a wonderful time :-)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 12:13 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child.  Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Edmonds  Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 2:59 PM
That was awful for you Paula, good that your dad got you to the hospital in time. I had a close call too, I was twelve when I took ill with a septic hip, that was horrendously painful. I spent three months in hospital, but I lived in pain right up until I was aged 52, then they operated, first on my knee that had taken all the strain over the years and that was very painful too, at 54 I had a hip replacement done, so life hasn’t been easy for me… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 12:11 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. Glad you are better now. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
DiMino Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 1:48 PM
Wow! Close call. God wanted you around for poetry. Everyone's life is a book of suspense and survival. Glad you are here:))
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 12:10 PM
"Thank You" for your comment. I enjoyed reading it. Guess God did need me for something. The book of life is filled with both good/bad. It was extra hard as a very young child. How are you liking the rain??? I am loving it. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...............
Goldsmith Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 12:04 PM
"Reflections On My Childhood In The Hospital." ~ Date Written:9/16/2026 ~ Written by Human Poet..........
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