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9/19/2026 for Reflection-s On Childhood Day-s Poetry Contest sponsored by Sara Kendrick 

Reflections on a Swing - SK

Finding a place to belong 
in childhood's lonely song,
up on grandma's swing,
I fly high and sing.

Sailing in the clouds of blue,
finding joy so true,
supported by a walnut tree,
I am finally free.

As my friendless soul escapes
by the tangerines and grapes,
I sail from earth to heaven,
a boy of only seven.

Birdy, please, a quill to pen,
for when I'm back on earth again.
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Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Way to go on your placement in my contest. I enjoyed reading your work. Sorry so late with coming by with this congratulations on your win. Sara K. 👏✍️
Crandall Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 4:28 PM
Thanks, Sara - I enjoyed your contest!
Rodgers Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Hey David, Congrats on POTD! Dedicating this to Sara Kendrick adds a sweet layer of fellowship, honoring how shared memories of childhood sanctuary connect us across time. What makes the final couplet so brilliant is the boy's awareness that flight is temporary, he knows he must eventually touch down again. It is deceptively simple on the surface, beautifully rhythmic, and carries golden light through every line. Delightful and deeply touching work, David. Blessings, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 8:05 PM
Hi Daniel, great point, I think there's something subtle in that last couplet, about knowing that the flight is a temporary escape. Probably in adults and in children's lives, there are long periods of...pain? drudgery? punctuated by bursts of pleasure? ecstasy?
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:27 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, David :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! 😊
Borg Avatar
September 26, 2026 at 7:47 PM
Childhood memories on a swing. what fun, I can still feel the sway after all these years! Goodness, you started to write poetry at a very early age! Congrats on your POTD.
Crandall Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 9:04 PM
Wow, pretty good guess - I'm 67!
Borg Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 2:11 PM
Really? From your picture, I guess you must be about 66 by now. In the space of two years, since you started writing poetry, you've been quite prolific and VERY humerous for sure.
Crandall Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 12:30 PM
Thanks, Pascal! Actually, up until the last two lines, this is 100% true, down to the walnuts, tangerines, and grapes, but I just threw in the last few lines because they sounded good. I didn't start writing poetry until I was about 64 years old!
Elston Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 1:46 PM
Lovely poem to read David, you captured the moment in such beautiful words. Congratulations on your POTD, well deserved. Jackie
Crandall Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 4:23 PM
Thanks, Jackie!
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 5:19 PM
Precious, beautiful, touching and beautifully written. CayCay
Crandall Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 9:48 PM
Aw, that's really nice to hear, CayCay!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Reflections on a Swing - SK"  write. What a wonderful ending you have here... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Crandall Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:17 PM
Thanks, Paula! Have a great day!
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 2:03 AM
Love this. Now you are gonna have 3 likes and get yet another poem on that top 100 list!!
Crandall Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:17 PM
Wow! Thanks, Andrea!
Nicole Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 7:15 PM
Such tender moments and memories you've chosen to reflect upon, my dear friend. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. Congratulations David, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Crandall Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:16 PM
Thanks, Brandy! I'm glad it gave you a good feeling!
Smith  Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 3:00 PM
A tender, beautifully rhymed childhood reflection. The simple quatrains and gentle musicality suit the swing’s rising motion, while images of the walnut tree, blue clouds, fruit, and the small “friendless soul” give the poem both warmth and poignancy. The closing appeal to Birdy for a quill is especially lovely—a child’s flight becoming the beginning of a poet’s voice. Congratulations on POTD
Crandall Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:15 PM
Thanks, Alison!
Kauffman Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 1:09 PM
Just delightful, David! A swing back into a cherished childhood memory! Congrats and high fives for your POTD! Blessings! So happy for you.
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Thanks so much, Sam!😊
Bartley Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 11:17 AM
Your poetry always gets me swinging. Congratulations.
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Haha, thanks, Benjamin!😀
La France Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 10:54 AM
David, wonderfully penned and congratulations n receiving the POTD honor ⭐
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Thanks, Constance!😊
Edmonds  Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 7:02 AM
A great read David, congratulations on having received the honour of Poem of the Day… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:50 AM
Hi Beryl! Thanks!
Gibbons Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 5:47 AM
Hi David fantastic write ✍️ a well deserved POTD honour 🌙🦄 took me back to my childhood days fun at my grans going to park playing on swings 😀 applauding this and fav it you should put music too this be catchy song 🎵 ❤️ hugz friend blessed Sunday
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:49 AM
Thanks, Dorothy! I wish I knew more about music. If I did, I would try to make lots of my poems into music 😄
Kitchin Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 5:31 AM
David, a wonderful nostalgic poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:48 AM
Thanks, Tania!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 5:13 AM
Love this sooo much! Swinging was my favorite on the playground. You dream up there in the clouds! I loved swinging every last one of the grands! I sent them to “Jupiter and Mars.” Congrats on POTD!
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:47 AM
Haha, exactly! Thanks, Kim!
George Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 4:20 AM
A poem so delightful with some of the childhood experiences recounted in vivid images. Congratulations dear David on your POTD status
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:46 AM
Thanks, Valsa!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 3:44 AM
a clever contest entry. congrats, David, on your POTD designation.
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:45 AM
Thanks, Sara!
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 2:43 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:43 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Jones Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 12:37 AM
Your poem is delightful David with fun flawless rhymes! Congratulations on potd!😊
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:43 AM
Thanks, Karen!
Sharma  Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 12:34 AM
Oh my! Back again with heartiest congratulations on POTD ~ haha, how beautiful! Enjoy your time, swinging with the sun and the birds ~ this poem just warmed my heart 🫂☀️🌊🏝️
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Thanks, Hiya!
Sharma  Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 12:03 AM
Awwwn this is such a nostalgic poem, dear David, with sweet memories.. with your grandma too.. reading this makes me remember abt the swing we had in our garden, and also the pretty one my dad brought for our balcony, I loved swinging back then n i wish those days would hv continued. What u said any lonely childhood, "childhood's lonely song" I felt that close to my heart and it resonates, as I did not hv any real friends since the very beginning. Sigh! Such a beautiful poem by you today! love everything about this! a fave for sure ~ keep writinnn n shininnn 🌙🍂🍁💫✨
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Thanks, Hiya! Yep, there's something about the back and forth of a swing that I found comforting, and on my grandmothers, you could get up really high, you could imagine you were even higher.
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 12:33 PM
- Good memories that bring joy to a lonely little boy, David - hugs
Crandall Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 11:04 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, yup, the swingset actually hung from a metal frame, but it was between the walnut tree and the tangerine tree and next to the grapes. They had a great yard and a great swing set!
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