"reflections of the Season's Tomorrows"

Reflections of the Season’s Tomorrows

Wondering how long before tomorrow.
Watching the door every time someone passed.
Trembling hands reached out for a moments joy. 
Her rosy cheeks and eyes were now faded.
Weeping, sitting in her room, she looked around.
Her aged heart had been for children waiting.

Ever since they left, she had been waiting.  
Promising, they said, “We’ll come tomorrow.”  
Reflections of the seasons shone around.  
But in her heart lived pain as each day passed.  
Her memories and delights, now, somehow faded.  
As youngsters they had been her only joy.  

Too much time gone; she could not feel their joy.  
So many of her days spent hoping, waiting. 
Her utmost fear was that their love had faded. 
She thought that there would not be a tomorrow. 
The sparkles in her eyes had all but passed.  
She spent each lonesome day dazed, looking around. 

Suddenly, they were there, children all around!
For the first time in years, she regained her joy –
One by one, she hugged them; loving glimpses passed.  
The time had come for which she had been waiting.  
Her dream arrived; at last it was tomorrow.  
Pain that she had felt forgivingly faded. 

Thankfully, love for them had not faded.  
Her gleaming eyes sent adoration around.  
All thanked God above for this new tomorrow.  
Grandchildren bounced balloons squealing with joy.  
It happened on a day she wasn’t waiting.  
One by one, the children kissed her as they passed.  

Each caring look joined reality; time passed.  
Her fragile squeeze showed them love had not faded 
Although she had been tirelessly waiting, 
There is happiness with family around. 
She knew, for the first time in some years, joy!  
Reflected gleams sparkled on her tomorrow.  

Too fast, the moments passed; holiday lights faded
There was no more waiting; loved ones came around.
Love redeemed joy, each today and tomorrow.



©  November 19, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol
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December 11, 2010 at 4:08 PM
wow,Dane ann, this is incredible. A well deserved win indeed. Luv, Andrea
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December 9, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on your win ....Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 4:02 AM
ongratulations on this well deserved second place win in the contetst, Dane
Onclaud Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 6:07 PM
truly a beguiling work that desreves a high win in the contest, dane... my special congrats!! .. nette
Sweetheart Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Way to go Dane Ann on your big win in Debbie's contest with this exquisitely written entry my friend.. enjoy your spot at the top of the winners list with luv..
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December 8, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Congrats on your big win..what a story..I was so relieved at the outcome. BG
Richards Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 2:40 PM
This heart wrenching poem is wonderful Dane Ann. Congratulations on your win!
Guzzi Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Seems everyones slow on the UPTAKE look who just tore our hearts out and rebuilt them with joy WHY you and you did the form so effortlessly! GREAT writing! Light & Love
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November 19, 2010 at 2:27 AM
Debbie. I have revised the last three lines as per your instructions. However, I am having trouble understanding how you came up with the end words: "PASSED & FADED in that order midline/Line 2 you want the words WAITING & AROUND midline/ line 3 JOY & TOMORROW." I like my revised lines, better. But I thought the end words were different. So please help me understand. (See e-mail with my analysis and understanding) Thank you for always trying to help us excel here on Poetry Soup. XOXOX
Mehta Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 1:07 PM
I can feel your feelings as I volunteered myself in Windsor, canada for a Hospital, Dane
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November 18, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Dane, the waiting moment has time passing by with fast joy, that will hopefully come back every day, with them awaiting smiles.. that sparks any reflection,. enjoyed your poem,..p..d
Guzzi Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 9:56 AM
The only thing "wrong" so to speak is in the last 3 lines/ Line 1 You want the words PASSED & FADED in that order midline/Line 2 you want the words WAITING & AROUND midline/ line 3 JOY & TOMORROW. NOw read your soupmail & I'll give you a wee bit more info..but really you don't have to change the body of the work .
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November 18, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Hon, the beginning of this poem presents us with a sad character who feels forgotten by her famil. I'm so glad they returned to her and brought much-needed joy to her life once more. It made me think of all the seniors in nursing homes who have few visitors. Very touching, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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