Reflections of the Mind

Staring…
Reflection…
Wondering…
Disappointment…
Sadness…
Questions….

Who am I?
What have I become?
Where did I go wrong?
When did I change?
Why do I look different?
How did this happen?

Shake head…
Look again…
Voices…
Don’t listen…
Reflection talking…
Double take…

Reflection grins…
Jump back…
Reflection stops…
Move closer…
Reflection grabs me…
Pulls me in…

By: Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 05/18/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/27/2009 8:57:00 AM
You are being molded for the poet's fire ... there the instrument becomes the sublime desire. Courage and faith.
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:47:00 AM
I like Barbara's thoughts, give us it all, and up until now its all McWow, James
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:31:00 PM
thanx for ur comment. nice poem, a bit scary though. love it
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Date: 5/20/2009 6:52:00 AM
I feel like I've seen horror movies that have similar scenes with the hero seeing his reflection grinning at him in the mirror. Your stream of consciousness style is more direct though. I wonder what happens after the subject gets pulled in. Somehow it doesn't feel like something good... Nice write Nathan - Yoni
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Date: 5/19/2009 10:13:00 PM
Nice work, I like the structure of the poem. I agree with the other two, your name's cool. Just keep impressing us with you incredibly unique talent...Raul
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:42:00 PM
Got your soup mail...I like this very much. Its different yet we all have question like you do. The last stanza is a winner.. I think you underestimate yourself..this is great writing. From personal experience...some of your stuff will be good..some excellent and some mediocre.. let us have it all..we're all learning. Bg
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Date: 5/19/2009 5:37:00 PM
Yes it is and thanks. :-)
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Date: 5/19/2009 5:36:00 PM
I love you name to, your middle name is cool. The poem read well, I like it. Is the second stanza's real questions that you ask.?
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:35:00 PM
See your soup mail..wow, I love your name. BG
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