Reflections of Fall

the sketch of dawn
cascades against the hills
in sanguine splashes
tipped of coral hues
beneath the yawn of sun
reflective horizon mirrored in trees

a linger of warmth
within autumn's breath
arouses my emotions

i twirl thoughts
like leaves
as they gracefully fall
in a downward spiral

suspended
temporarily
in a wayward breeze

i watch
as they tumble
one by one
like life
of each
now lost

memories
keep me grounded
beneath the pitch
of shifting wind
yet my mind rustles
the same as leaves

i feel emotions
being stripped
like trees
within fall's breath

knowing with certainty
soon they too will stand
naked, grounded, alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 5/8/2020 2:37:00 AM
Congratulated Exponential Facilitations Bravo On your First Place
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Date: 5/1/2020 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Each season seems to come and go so fast. Have a wonderful weekend with your win....
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Date: 5/1/2020 10:15:00 AM
Sandra, beautiful writing, I loved your poem and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
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Date: 4/30/2020 10:23:00 PM
Amazing poetic expression my friend - "sketches of dawn," "yawn of the sun," "emotions...stripped." The passing of the season mingled with the passing of memories. Nicely done. Congratulations on your top win! Prayers and blessigs.
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Date: 9/13/2019 4:03:00 PM
Amazing write, Sandy..only you can write these lines:horizon mirrored in trees..my mind rustles the same as the leaves..and many more. Very impressed, as always.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/13/2019 6:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for your sweet comment, it made me smile...i have always used nature as metaphors...why i don't know, i am guessing all the time i spend enjoying its beauty :) hugs
Date: 9/13/2019 11:49:00 AM
Oh wow! Your muse seems to working just fine to me! Lol if you think that's acting up send her my way lol and I will straighten her out! Hahaha! Mine has gotten old and tired! So we can switch to see if they are of any use to the other! Hahaha! This was simply splendid my friend... your description was spot on in the beautiful side!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/13/2019 11:58:00 AM
Thank you my friend, it's taking me hours to write poems, when normally i can spit them out in minutes...hopefully it gets better...your muse seems to be singing just fine i might add, i read your latest post... :) hugs
Date: 9/13/2019 11:14:00 AM
Leaves falling is one thing but emotions falling alone on the ground, that is a heart breaker. Your poem has all of the beauty of the fall season though still carries a feeling of sadness. Wonderful and amazing as always my friend. Know that here, your emotions may fall but they will never rest alone.
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Date: 9/13/2019 11:25:00 AM
my muse seems to love emotions and sadness, why i don't know, i was born in the fall, so it has to be good right? lol, i just know that after all its beauty shines, it leaves the scenery a little dull...no color except sunrise midway through its reign, it's like the world around us is in black and white until spring... Thank you my friend :) hugs
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