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.                    So 
                  appear 
             the visions, 
                       kind
                     of my
                 scenes 
             Unwind. 
               With              such  joyful
           thoughts    of all those yesterdays. 
           The times we both spent together. 
            Reflections of fun in any weather. 
             The days when you were mine.
                 Yes reflections are so fine. 
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                   Yes reflections are so fine.                      
              The days when you were mine.
             Reflections of fun in any weather. 
            The times we both spent together.
             Thoughts    of all those yesterdays,
               With                such  joyful
             unwind.
                Scenes
                  of my
                    kind.                
              The visions
                   appear
                      So
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Date: 7/2/2025 2:44:00 PM
Oh this is very very cool! Congrats.
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Date: 7/2/2025 2:43:00 AM
you reflect beauty and effort dear poet. That deadly combination brings stunning effect! Congratulations, I feel the joy. cheers!!!
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Date: 2/13/2024 2:37:00 AM
This is beautiful! I also tried to send you soup mail but site is glitching. Congratulations on making the best new 100 poems on soup for your gem poem Thinking of You! I tried to listen but my iPhone is not working properly. I couldn’t even leave a message on the poem.
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Date: 2/14/2024 8:52:00 PM
Thanks so Much Karen I had no idea it had made any lists. I too tried to send a soup mail this morning and it failed. Must be a glitch somewhere. Thanks for your lovely comment ... Wen
Date: 11/26/2023 10:15:00 AM
I can totally empathize with not thinking my work is anything special. I absolutely love that humility in you, but don't sell yourself short this is an amazing feat! I've written concrete I have never written a reflective shape poem especially one that reads so properly in either direction, this is truly an inspiring effort! What an absolute honor to read. A.S.
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Date: 11/27/2023 5:05:00 AM
Gulp, how does one answer such astonishing praise? All I can possibly say is thank you. My motto on here is. " If you cant be better, be different" and that's what this one is. Your comment AS is appreciated (sincerely).
Date: 9/14/2023 1:34:00 AM
Very nicely done.
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Date: 9/14/2023 3:55:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/9/2023 9:05:00 AM
Wonderfully written, I'm quite inspired by the creativity here.
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Date: 9/9/2023 6:28:00 PM
Thank you Harveen, I am glad that you appreciate my humble efforts. Best wishes.
Date: 9/6/2023 2:45:00 AM
Love this..Love both style and reflections.
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Date: 9/6/2023 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine,so nice of you to read and comment on my poem. Your kind words are appreciated.
Date: 9/5/2023 8:12:00 AM
Brilliant, wonderful imagination and presentation. Well deserved honor!
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Date: 9/5/2023 9:49:00 AM
Hi Joe Thanks for encouraging comment, its appreciated. Best wishes SV
Date: 9/5/2023 3:12:00 AM
Oh wow SV, I did not manage to see this one before awesome creativity on all levels!!!
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Date: 9/5/2023 4:06:00 AM
Thanks Terry, it got a lot more attention than I expected. All I did was copy a template off the internet and fill it with a lil poem. But hey I am not arguing.. :)
Date: 9/2/2023 1:22:00 AM
Wow! Awesome work, SV, double congratulations on POTD and trophy win:)
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Date: 9/2/2023 2:32:00 AM
Thanks Jo. Really appreciate your kind words.
Date: 9/1/2023 6:02:00 PM
We love you, S.V. damn! Congratulations on a Trophy Win, my wonderful, Aussie freind! ;D Cheers!
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Date: 9/1/2023 8:43:00 PM
Look what happens when you follow a templet! Not bad for someone that cant draw a straight line ! Thanks darlin friend. As always your support is appreciated.
Date: 9/1/2023 5:07:00 PM
Trophy placement well deserved, congrats!
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Date: 9/1/2023 8:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Barbara, the accolades for this poem have been overwhelming. I am truly humbled.
Date: 9/1/2023 11:23:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-earned win, SV. Hugs
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Lasaad. I am speechless.
Date: 9/1/2023 10:45:00 AM
- Congratulations ... top winning poem,S.V :) - hugs
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. I am speechless.
Date: 9/1/2023 10:39:00 AM
SV, congratulations on your trophy win! So happy to see this marvelous, poetic creation garner another award!!! High fives to you! Blessings and cheers!
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Sam. I am speechless.
Date: 8/31/2023 1:49:00 PM
this is wonderful and artful, a great one, thanks poet
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Date: 8/31/2023 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Yann
Date: 8/31/2023 9:30:00 AM
What a fantastic art ! Your creativity has bounced to unprecedented heights! Your artwork and your poem, both are graceful and impressive. I feel so happy that this great poem is made Poem of the Day! Nothing short of excellence. Enjoy the honor sweet SV.
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Date: 8/31/2023 9:53:00 AM
Thanks so much sweet friend. Still not my favorite form of poetry. The shapes kind of restrict the poetry, but its fun messing with new ideas. POTD is a huge job, so many replies to make. I never realized the enormity of the task before. your beautiful comment is always welcomed. Cheers from SV
Date: 8/31/2023 5:52:00 AM
I am impressed by this artful piece. The words and image are sublime.
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Date: 8/31/2023 6:19:00 AM
You are too kind. Thank you for your encouragement Richard, it is appreciated. Best wishes SV.
Date: 8/31/2023 3:39:00 AM
Startling! as this opened up on my screen! I thought WOW! instant fav & the words, intent & phrases then so fit the image…a TOTAL expression of reflecting memories of love — seen, flowing, with grace gliding, floating — off in beauty outside of here. This is a work that will stay on in me! Wow!
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Date: 8/31/2023 5:39:00 AM
WOW thank you Sally, such a wonderful wrap up for my poem. I am speechless . Best wishes from SV
Date: 8/30/2023 11:55:00 PM
Brilliant and very clever reflection of the swan. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done!
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Date: 8/31/2023 5:43:00 AM
Thanks Jeanette, I wasn't expecting anything like yours and the other lovely comments. Truthfully, the best I had hoped for was that Brian Strand might notice it ! Now there's a true confession.
Date: 8/30/2023 7:47:00 PM
Your words float along the page with elegance and grace, soft simplicity. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Speaks Volumes, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/30/2023 9:04:00 PM
My goodness Brandy, your comment is nicer than my poem ! Thank you. You definitely warmed my heart on this last day of Winter here in Australia. Thank you so much.
Date: 8/30/2023 6:53:00 PM
WOW!! S.V, you outdid yourself with this one. Fantabulous! I would have loved to share it on fb if I still have one. I used to have FB friends who are crazy about swans. They would’ve loved it. I love it too. Well a BIG congrats on potd dear one! :)
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Date: 8/30/2023 9:07:00 PM
Share away, I used to keep up with my granddaughter . She has moved to other ways that we communicate now, so I haven't used it in ages. Please feel free to copy and paste it anywhere you like. Thanks for your comment. Best wishes.
Date: 8/30/2023 5:48:00 PM
I know, same poem above as below. I hope you don't mind, but I posted it on facebook... a lot of positive feedback.
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Date: 8/30/2023 9:12:00 PM
Hi my friend. You are very welcome to paste it any where. I had to adjust the poem to read properly on the reflection. It doesn't read the same. The top poem ends quite differently to the lower one, although the words are the same. It is a long way from being the favorite of my poems. Best wishes Eve
Date: 8/30/2023 12:33:00 PM
Back with Hearty Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD with this lovely and creatively penned poem, SV.
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:39:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I have been promised release any time now, no time answer in depth, but you know how grateful I am for your support.
Date: 8/30/2023 11:08:00 AM
I agree with Sam, very creative. A great selection for POTD, as well.
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Jim.
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