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Reflections - the Fragrance of Grace

Reflection - The Fragrance of Grace Mail order catalogs seem to have the ability to procreate in my mailbox. Just when I think I have rendered them infertile they give birth to multiple sets of quintuplets right under my nose as if by magic fertilization! And, of course, I have to examine these newborn opportunities to raid my bank account just to make sure I haven’t missed some article of clothing or thing I can’t possibly live without for the survival of sanity and my eternal happiness. They are like new spring leaves! spring sprouts in new leaves boughs sport jackets of light green ~ chartreuse convention A new arrival from a New England country store pictured a garden of stately purple iris that immediately grabbed my hand and took me on a ride back into my grandmother’s iris garden with delicate, yet eloquent, perfume wafting from silky petaled garden royalty. Each page was an adventurous journey through my childhood reminiscing about miracle wrinkle erasing creams, magic bunion healers and kitchen gadgets long declared useless by technology. But, one page made me stop, drop and drool - perfumes. No nascent scents but old friends looking at me from glossy pages bringing to mind the women who gave my life definition – the Royal Secret of my grandmother; Bellodgia and Gardenia of my favorite aunts; Tigress of my tigress mother and Blue Grass, a Kentucky meadow perfume of my teens. These remarkable women straddled fleeing decades, crushing depressions, cataclysmic world wars often suffering the unthinkable loss of infants, children, husbands, siblings and miscarriages. Yet, through their signature scents, they taught me about thanksgiving in tragedy, faith in grieving and the irrepressible iron will to live in the fragrance of grace. harlequin bouquets fragrance of flower’s essence ~ sunlight washed gardens 4-21-21 Contest: Moments of Reflections Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Date: 9/8/2022 5:35:00 AM
Love, love the haiku, Sam! Congrats!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/8/2022 10:08:00 AM
Hi LJ! Thank you so much for your note of congratulations and your feedback! Didn't think I was going to like writing haibun but have discovered that this form combines storytelling and haiku - two art forms I really enjoy. So glad you liked the haiku! Sending you many blessings and all the best! Hope you are doing well!
Date: 8/20/2022 6:25:00 AM
Great fragrance, indeed, Very scent and above. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/22/2022 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris! Every time I catch a hint of one of these fragrances I am in the presence of one of these remarkable women. I love being able to share that experience. Sending you many blessings on the fragrance of grace.
Date: 8/18/2022 8:29:00 PM
"Yet, through their signature scents, they taught me about thanksgiving in tragedy, faith in grieving and the irrepressible iron will to live in the fragrance of grace. " What a heirloom of grace you have inherited from your grand mother, mother and aunts.... women who gave definition to your life ! Sam, you have all the above qualities, listed..... What we are, we inherit through our genes and of course through self effort. Much enjoyed this wonderful Haibun. Congratulations on your win....dear Sam. Into my FAVE
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Date: 8/22/2022 11:29:00 AM
Valsa, I am deeply honored by your heartfelt message. To be compared to these amazing women is treasure beyond compare. I am so glad this poem spoke to you - so honored by your fav! We indeed inherit our genes but I like your comment about our effort to "become." This is our lifelong journey and we journey together with family and dear companions on the journey. Sending you many blessings and many hugs dear friend.
Date: 8/18/2022 12:54:00 PM
Let me be the first to say, "Congratulations" on your win. A wonderful write. Love your ending. Have a great/blessed day.............
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Date: 8/18/2022 1:40:00 PM
many thanks Paula. They were special women and when I smell their signature fragrances they all come back to me like they never left. Sending you many blessings in the fragrance of grace.
Date: 5/14/2021 9:05:00 AM
Wow, fragrance of grace... what an amazing poem. And I like the humor in the first stanza of the mail order catalogues procreating. Ha! Good one, Sam. This poem is a good read, and I read it twice! Congratulations on your first place win. Carol Louise
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Date: 5/19/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol Louise! Had to have some fun with the procreating catalogues but in the end they led me to precious memories of incredible women and their stories of courage under fire and grace under unimaginable circumstances. It was an honor to honor them! Blessings to you.
Date: 5/12/2021 12:14:00 PM
Kudos on the mail order catalogs. I've been ditching them, yet find ordering by phone or on line for something I don't even need. Your imagery of the memories of women with scents is so so delightful. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/12/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend! It was an honor to give tribute to and celebrate these amazing women. Sending you prayers as you finish your classes and projects! Let me know how they go.
Date: 5/11/2021 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 5/12/2021 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Mala. I am delighted with your placement of this haibun! But even more than that, I am so appreciative of your contest that took me into memories of the women who formed my life through the memories of their "scents." It was a wonderful contest theme. I am grateful! Blessings and a big hug of gratitude!
Date: 4/22/2021 11:19:00 PM
I love the humour of the mailbox section and the imagery throughout Sam. What I liked the most, though, was the association of perfume scents to people and their importance in your life. Using this subtle device your haibun took me on a different course championing human spirit. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/28/2021 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Gary! So happy you enjoyed the humor and that it gave you a chuckle. One of these days that humor is going to get me into real trouble! Per usual you see right into the heart of this poem - the human spirit unbowed - wrapped up in the fragrance of grace renewed by the scents of my childhood. Warmest wishes to you! Thank you!
Date: 4/21/2021 7:02:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this lovely well penned haibun, rendered them infertile they give birth to multiple sets of quintuplets right under my nose as if by magic fertilization! And, of course, I have to examine these newborn opportunities... Really loved everything you said here. Have a great Evening Sam, and good luck in the contest. // Lasaad
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Date: 4/28/2021 2:02:00 PM
I am so happy you enjoyed this trip down memory lane hand in hand with the fragrances of my childhood. Was hard to pick one memory. Thank you for your always perceptive and thoughtful messages! Thank you for your positive wishes. So grateful! All the best to you Lasaad! Blessings too!! :)
Date: 4/21/2021 2:11:00 PM
Nice piece of writing, Sam. I enjoyed every word of it!~ very entertaining.
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Date: 4/28/2021 1:56:00 PM
Hi LM! Many, many thanks and much gratitude for your message! So glad you enjoyed this write. It is definitely steeped in very sweet memories. Hope you are well. Easter season blessings - so wonderful to have a whole season to celebrate even after the candy is gone and the bunny has disappeared for another year!
Date: 4/21/2021 1:58:00 PM
Mighty witty and entertaining. Absolute poetic experience dearest, Sam. Much enjoyed! Blessings
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Date: 4/28/2021 1:52:00 PM
Thank you dear Demetrios! The theme of this haibun contest led me back into overflowing memories - memories that return when the scent of grace wafts past me in sweet pictures of reminiscence. Hope you are well. Sending you prayers and blessings!

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