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Reflection of An Angel

I saw a reflection of an angel. It was rather vague yet so real. It told me a story of sanctity. It told me a story of aged maturity. It was beautiful. I saw a reflection of an angel. It was rather vague yet so real. It held out its pure hand. Reached for a strand of my weary hair. Swiftly stroked it back and put it in its rightful place. It was soothing. I saw a reflection of an angel. It was rather vague yet so real. It took my hand and gently clasped it. Pulled me up to stand on my feet; And gently whispered…” this is how you start…” It was strengthening. I saw a reflection of an angel It was rather vague yet so real. It scooped my hands up in the air. Slightly forced my head to tilt upward; And with another whisper said..."This is how you surrender To a much greater purpose”. It was heartbreaking. I saw a reflection of an angel. It was rather vague yet so real. It gently wiped away a tear. Washed it away with warm waters. Gently swiped my face with a towel of hope. It was awakening. I saw a reflection of an angel. It was rather vague yet so real. It titled my head towards the mirror. And gently whispered “this is a story of sanctity… This is a strand of a life ahead full of exaltation; A few feet away from healing that inspires; This is a story of great surrender to pain And welcoming of inner peace This is a story of a gentle tear that will forever Form a river of immersed hope; It was divine fulfillment.

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Date: 7/3/2014 10:04:00 AM
This is indeed a truly fantastic write!!!! I have to say bravo and bravoooooo!!
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Date: 3/17/2014 3:27:00 PM
....This Is A Story In Broken Pieces, Pedestals, Mantras Her Summer Breeze ~ His Cliff's Edge Their Valley Love's Cloak And, Destiny ~ Do You Believe This Martha ? .... I Am, The Resurrection And The Life: No One, Comes Unto `THE FATHER,` Except, Through, Me ~ So Don't Believe All The Imitation Generic Wish I Were But I'm Truly Not, Pseudo Wanna B's! ~ But You Girl, You Are Radiant And Beautiful And Your Painting Is, A Favourite To Be Treasured ~ My Love, Always & Forever, John
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Date: 3/17/2014 3:35:00 PM
........IT'S ALL IN THE KISS, BABY *:*(* BUT YOU BABY GIRL, YOU, YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL..........
Date: 3/15/2014 2:00:00 PM
My God! This is such a wonderful piece. Definitely a 7 for me. Good work Herzel
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Date: 2/25/2014 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win.
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:45:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,herzel
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:18:00 AM
Herzel, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2014 2:53:00 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Herzel. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2014 7:20:00 AM
This is beyond exceptional, I am moved by these words. God has smiled upon you!
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Date: 2/13/2014 6:04:00 AM
Words of inspiration Herzel, beautiful...Lekau
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Date: 2/12/2014 9:18:00 AM
I see a reflection of an angel too . In the heart of the person who wrote this lovely poem, Daz
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