Reflection

These thoughts that I think
The words that I say
The things that I write 
They all come to play
Never the where or
Never the when but
Always the pain
It comes from within
Pen to the page 
The words come with ease
A feeling of rage
Just go away please
These thoughts that I sow
The words seem to spite
For whom I don't know but
The mirror just might.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Austin Avatar
August 22, 2008 at 5:56 AM
Isn't it great to be able to share these thoughts with others on the soup. Good write. Love, daver
Mcgrath Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 9:42 AM
this would be a great song!bravo
George   Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 1:40 AM
Very clever and well written. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Wayne. Lainie
Jordan Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 12:20 PM
Great rhyme and flow carried this poem to a excellent conclusion - Great job - Congrats on the feature
Williams Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations Wayne on having your poem featured! Nicole
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August 18, 2008 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on "Reflection" being featured, Wayne. Vince
Winter Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations Wayne on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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August 18, 2008 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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August 17, 2008 at 1:46 PM
Nice use of rhyme in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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