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Reflection

These thoughts that I think The words that I say The things that I write They all come to play Never the where or Never the when but Always the pain It comes from within Pen to the page The words come with ease A feeling of rage Just go away please These thoughts that I sow The words seem to spite For whom I don't know but The mirror just might.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 8/22/2008 5:56:00 AM
Isn't it great to be able to share these thoughts with others on the soup. Good write. Love, daver
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Date: 8/20/2008 9:42:00 AM
this would be a great song!bravo
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Date: 8/20/2008 1:40:00 AM
Very clever and well written. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Wayne. Lainie
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Date: 8/18/2008 12:20:00 PM
Great rhyme and flow carried this poem to a excellent conclusion - Great job - Congrats on the feature
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Date: 8/18/2008 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations Wayne on having your poem featured! Nicole
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Date: 8/18/2008 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on "Reflection" being featured, Wayne. Vince
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Date: 8/18/2008 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations Wayne on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2008 1:46:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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