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As the sun begins to set and it's final rays slowly dance across this golden pond I silently stare into her reflection staring back at me past the old and the weathered ripples down beneath the surface into the soul the deep and loving soul the memories bubble out memories of kindness and love honesty and humility and memories of you how I'd do anything for you for us I stand here in silence and dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 7/30/2015 9:58:00 PM
I think is about time to start thinking of a book! Another beautiful write Tim!
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Date: 7/29/2015 2:25:00 PM
That is a lovely write, Tim. It is full of love....lovely depth to it. :)
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Date: 7/29/2015 12:38:00 AM
this is gorgeous, tim, truly a gem. SEVEN
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Date: 7/28/2015 6:12:00 AM
- Quiet and beautiful thoughts ..... with love - a beautiful poem, Tim - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:29:00 AM
It feels great to be back.and read such a soul grabbing poem and heart touching verse- BEAUTiFUL !
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Date: 7/26/2015 7:26:00 PM
Soulful and romantic Tim!
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Date: 7/25/2015 4:22:00 PM
you reveal your sense of introspection with tender images, tim... lovely work.. huggs
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Date: 7/25/2015 7:03:00 AM
Magic, utterly magic, my good friend! As Dave wrote... fabulous write!!!
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Date: 7/24/2015 12:45:00 PM
You're a most proiferic writer... I love this reflective poem... It's to sigh over... Be still my heart!... If only I could do it too. But Dragon has other ideas... Silly Dragon always wants my attention... LOL... PS. Thank you for visiting.
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Date: 7/24/2015 5:52:00 AM
Captivating the heart and soul! dear Tim!
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:12:00 AM
Romantic write Tim reflects sadness deep inside! Great work!
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:00:00 AM
Beautiful but a little sad at the end.. how are you Tim? Thank you that you visit my poem today.. :) I'm glad to see you still notice me... =') I hope all is well with you and your kids.. Keep the sweet pen flowing!! BIG HUGS!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 7/23/2015 7:33:00 PM
Your work just keeps on getting better. This is truly beautiful in is delivery and its dream like quality. Emile.
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Date: 7/23/2015 4:39:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. I like it.
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Date: 7/23/2015 4:32:00 PM
such beautiful tranquil romantic imagery Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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