Reflecting On Police Brutality

It was the spring of ‘74 when my student peers and I
were on the tail end of a group excursion  
through southern Spain, across Gibraltar’s Strait
and into the exotic northern tip of Africa.
I remember lots of greenery and mountains
and the fascinating sights and sounds inside Tangier,
but one small thing that happened somewhere between
the time we viewed the landscape we traversed 
and our time inside our destination city
stands out in my mind forevermore.

Our bus had briefly stopped on the street of a town.
I was looking out the window when I glimpsed a child,
looking poor and ragged, not so old.
He ran down the block with an orange in his hand,
an older man behind him in pursuit.
Quickly I observed that the man 
was a type of law enforcement officer,
 for he wielded a long strong stick
which he proceeded to use on the unfortunate lad
once he had caught up to him.

The event was very near our bus, 
so I could watch with growing horror
as this country’s version of a cop
unleashed brutality on a fellow human being,
a boy who was no doubt simply starved for food.
I saw the heavy stick fall repeatedly
till it struck the boy’s ear and blood gushed out. . . 

I would later view ornate gold buildings in Tangier,
 see colorful hand-crafted clothes and rugs, and smell
the aromas of strange delightful foods,
but beneath all that wonder was the singular event
that stayed inside my brain.

I think of my own country - free, so very free,
with laws against “this kind of thing” that had appalled me;
a land so free that gangs of filthy evil men, 
even sometimes with the help of the police,
had in days of yore lynched the black man
for crimes as meager as the taking of that orange,
or worse, for no crime at all!
Hateful mobs had beat and hanged
men and women, even children,
In the midst of the beauty of 
fragrant magnolia trees . . .

Civil Rights has done a lot 
to eradicate these horrors, yet even now,
a remnant of the Ku Klux Klan mentality
exists inside the minds of some, and even in
 the minds of some we trust to uphold the law.
I cannot know the thoughts that enter
the minds of law enforcers who think they are confronting
a person who they’ve deemed a criminal. 
I cannot know their fear when they see, perhaps,
what they suppose to be a weapon.
We cannot know their backgrounds 
or if they harbor prejudice against another color
or against the lower class.
The court and the jury decide the fate of those
who have used what our society may see as undue force.
God alone will judge them in the end.

We, as citizens of all the world, must be aware
that violence can be used
when the threat of it against themselves
is perceived by our police.
How sad to think that some of those 
who serve to offer us protection ,
whether out of ignorance, fear, or prejudice,
are using brutality so haphazardly. 

Those in my own country who have seen 
or even experienced police brutality
must have felt the same horror I felt the day I saw
a child beaten in a foreign land.
Who am I to judge another country
when mine is also mired still in sin?
God help us all to fight against 
the inane and unjust cruelty of those
who practice police brutality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/11/2020 2:16:00 PM
Andrea, this is AMAZINGLY prescient of May 2020.
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Date: 4/22/2015 11:11:00 AM
The United States Government should remove all Military Vehicles and Equipment from our City Police departments, who have no military training. One soldier said it best, "They have more equipment than we had in Iraq!"
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:28:00 PM
WOW, that is some poem Andrea, it was nice seeing Cyndi's "I CAN'T BREATHE, generous list." Hope you enjoyed the showcase of this powerful contest theme. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/16/2015 9:29:00 AM
back to say congrats on win Andrea hugs 7
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Date: 4/16/2015 6:51:00 AM
Andrea, this is my first reading of this powerful write. It poses the incredulous question of "how can this be happening here? Or any where else?". A disturbing and thought provoking read.
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:16:00 PM
I thought this was so well written... thank you for your patience in me finalizing the anthology. I had no idea that I would get so down this winter and then I chose to request poems for an anthology with a very REAL and harsh theme. It did me in. I fell into each poem. All the poems truly moved me, some stunned. But it will be a while before I tackle something like this again. It is a rich anthology. I'm so glad people put their hearts into this. I am proud of those who went the distance.
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:28:00 AM
Wonderfully written prose. Great heartfelt piece with wonderful diction throughout to explain your POV in a tremendous way that juxtaposes the beautiful poetry (In the midst of the beauty of fragrant magnolia trees) with the brutal subject nature. Last stanza is very thought provoking regarding "the day I saw a child beaten in a foreign land" - wow...
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Date: 12/28/2014 2:05:00 AM
WOW,.. I would post a comment to point out something, but you said it all for me.. very well done..~Joel
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:14:00 PM
Yes its a strange world Andrea, the striving for equality, better living standards (there is always) some ideal..' and yet there exists this example beside things as we envisage them to be, I guess even the perpetrators, have some idea of betterment, yet how to get real change.?
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Date: 12/18/2014 1:49:00 PM
Definite food for thought...people do seem to be acting out, far too quickly and without thought. I know that the incident in Tangier would've stuck with me, too. A well penned piece of poetry.
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Date: 12/18/2014 1:38:00 PM
A very moving and powerful protest poem. I love your question in the last stanza. It is so easy for some to turn blind eyes to what is happening on their own doorsteps and tell everyone else what they are doing wrong.
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Date: 12/17/2014 6:09:00 PM
Andrea, This such a sad but true work on our generations reality, sometimes I wonder what kind of world are we leaving to our young people today. Excellent work on this topic though, great job, cheri
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:36:00 PM
This is moving. Hate certainly exists in this land. There was a Hasidic man attacked recently in my city and there was the case of Eric Garner, Let me know what you think of my latest short work if you want to. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:48:00 PM
Powerful words and nicely written.
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:59:00 AM
You have engraved this powerful image on my mind. This is a moving piece of writing. Humans are capable of great savagery but also great tenderness, a true enigma.
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Date: 12/16/2014 12:18:00 AM
Those images will never leave you...so sad to see brutality from authority figures we place our trust in. A thought provoking, most powerful prose, Andrea. Thank you for sharing...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/15/2014 9:37:00 PM
history is filled with examples of people given power who then abuse it.Power is a drug some can handle some can't.The problem is when it is seen or known by others who have the same power they band together rather than confront those among them that should have their power taken away...fear and self righteousness is also a drug..
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Date: 12/15/2014 2:49:00 PM
I object to violence because when it appears to do good, the good is only temporary; the evil it does is permanent. Mahatma Gandhi. A magnificent write. A Fav.
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Date: 12/15/2014 2:47:00 PM
Evil is a constant foe -- dresses up in all kinds of uniforms . . . we need to have sharps eyes to spot these impostors for they indict us all.
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Date: 12/15/2014 1:10:00 PM
I'm from next to Florissant... And have seen extreme restrait by the Police also... Don't despair... There is always hope. But people are forever people... Great write.
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:46:00 AM
such a powerful piece of writing with such graphic imagery - sadly this type of brutality continues in our so called civilised society:-(good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:33:00 AM
A powerful piece of writing. A thought provoking piece of writing for me, on a day when café goers in my own country are being held hostage. Like you say, who is to know what history a law enforcement has had prior to an incident. But brutality, by anyone, should never be condoned. I'm off to catch up on the news from Sydney. Oh and you excel at Prose too huh! Is there no dull spot on your literary armour?
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:20:00 AM
We still have a long way to go, but I think when we allow the police who commit murder to walk free we are sending the wrong message. Very good write Andrea...
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Date: 12/15/2014 6:39:00 AM
The police are there to protect us from these brutal things that you described so powerfully, Andrea. Civil rights have helped a lot, but there is still much to be done. // paul
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Date: 12/15/2014 6:00:00 AM
very powerful pen Andrea I have some wonderful memories of Tangier, where I spent 3 months back in 1972 the best fish and chips I have ever eaten anywhere and the cafe de la Royal with its lovely dias on which sat two thrones highlighted by a marvelous stained glass window and yes much brutality too. 7 dracma to the pound and wages of 4 dracma a week a very poor country hugs
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