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Rediscovering

Dancing in the moonlight ‘neath the stars These treasured moments we will share, Putting behind us those inevitable scars Dancing in the moonlight ‘neath the stars Recovering our relationship, how bizarre, Who would have thought we were a pair Dancing in the moonlight ‘neath the stars These treasured moments we will share. written March 20, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/21/2022 4:22:00 PM

I like the consistency and prettiness of this one.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/21/2022 5:04:00 PM

Thanks, Caren. I'll dedicate it to you and Joe!

Marco Chies

Date: 3/20/2022 5:38:00 PM

I really like these poems with cadence, musicality, rhythm. You are becoming a master of this technique.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/20/2022 7:09:00 PM

I like the form, so I write them from time to time. They come fairly easy for me. As you might suppose, I really enjoy villanelle, terzanelles, terza rimas, and triolets. I love work games, and these are like working a puzzle to me.