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Redemption

The bewitching hour of the night The streets mysterious without lights The moon hid his face The goblins out to conquer the human race The black clouds came rushing forth And all those folk from their warm hearth Came out attracted by the hum The time for goblin market had come Bright red and green vials Black and gold watches with satanic dials Thick lacquered boxes filled with lust For good fortune buying it was a must From the holy city of Byzantine they say The wanton maiden said, if I may Touched the multicoloured scarf of softest velvet And picked up the vial of ominous jet As she tasted the forbidden juice From the sky with hopelessness looked on the muse The maiden became crazed, her eyes so blue It was her fall though she was true The goblins merrily laughed And up and down the pavement they pranced The tender soul was tormented in hell The vale overflowed with deadly smell A little child came to her rescue And the rain started as if on cue He had a face of a lamb To wash away sins and apply balm He gently lifted her withering form Through the heavy rain and black storm He touched those lips so red Hell receded, the night was dead by- Tahera Mannan Inspired by the poem,'Goblin Market' by Christina Rosetti

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/28/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Tahera. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comments.. Luv Ralph
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:38:00 AM
A big congratulations on your win Tahera. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win with this very intriguing & gripping piece! Very vivid images :) --nikko :)
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:43:00 AM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write luv.. so happy to be sharing the winners circle with one of the very best .. enjoy..
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Date: 2/28/2011 5:04:00 AM
really amazing, tahera! best cheers for stunning win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:34:00 PM
I haven't read the poem by Rosetti that inspired this, but this was a humdinger! Congrats on this spendid poem of yours in the Best poetry contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/27/2010 6:10:00 AM
Magnificent Tahera.. u have a flair with words and a perfect piece of poetry am reading my friend.. a true tribute to a lovely poetess .. enjoy a happy weekend my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 11/27/2010 4:30:00 AM
Spooky write, glad its morning lol....enjoyed as always...luv Michael
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