Redemption

The bewitching hour of the night
The streets mysterious without lights
The moon hid his face
The goblins out to conquer the human race

The black clouds came rushing forth
And all those folk from their warm hearth
Came out attracted by the hum
The time for goblin market had come

Bright red and green vials
Black and gold watches with satanic dials
Thick lacquered boxes filled with lust
For good fortune buying it was a must

From the holy city of Byzantine they say
The wanton maiden said, if I may
Touched the multicoloured scarf of softest velvet
And picked up the vial of ominous jet

As she tasted the forbidden juice
From the sky with hopelessness looked on the muse
The maiden became crazed, her eyes so blue
It was her fall though she was true

The goblins merrily laughed
And up and down the pavement they pranced
The tender soul was tormented in hell
The vale overflowed with deadly smell

A little child came to her rescue
And the rain started as if on cue
He had a face of a lamb
To wash away sins and apply balm

He gently lifted her withering form
Through the heavy rain and black storm
He touched those lips so red
Hell receded, the night was dead

by- Tahera Mannan
Inspired by the poem,'Goblin Market' by Christina Rosetti
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Tahera. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comments.. Luv Ralph
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February 28, 2011 at 10:38 AM
A big congratulations on your win Tahera. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win with this very intriguing & gripping piece! Very vivid images :) --nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write luv.. so happy to be sharing the winners circle with one of the very best .. enjoy..
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February 28, 2011 at 5:04 AM
really amazing, tahera! best cheers for stunning win! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:34 PM
I haven't read the poem by Rosetti that inspired this, but this was a humdinger! Congrats on this spendid poem of yours in the Best poetry contest. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Magnificent Tahera.. u have a flair with words and a perfect piece of poetry am reading my friend.. a true tribute to a lovely poetess .. enjoy a happy weekend my friend.. with luv..
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November 27, 2010 at 4:30 AM
Spooky write, glad its morning lol....enjoyed as always...luv Michael
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