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Redemption - For Contest

Redemption Fragments of broken dreams haunt the edge of sunrise, awakening the beauty of each piece. 2/23/2016 submitted to – Fragment of Life – Poetry contest sponsor – Broken Wings

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Date: 3/15/2016 10:58:00 AM
John, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/8/2016 10:20:00 PM
Delightful poetry John.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/8/2016 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Interesting.
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Date: 3/7/2016 3:34:00 PM
wow, Deep and lovely!!
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Date: 3/7/2016 10:26:00 AM
Wow John, this is an amazing cinquain. Well done! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:28:00 AM
Very optimistic, John. Great write.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/29/2016 1:20:00 PM
yeah, and I usually lean a bit toward the dark side. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment

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