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redder and clear the letters came same as before yet changes name leaving dates to mark the time lines across a cross of course! sips from the hips of a love never lost reading the lips that glide on frost can I build a carpet and say we’re late or drive real fast and land on a date the eternal brew of a tee quite right is gentle when we can see the light per and pur the kitten asked making sure she’s heard at last i scratched a patch into grains of sand turned a quest!on mark to form the bond i see your lines have crossed with mine i’m the inn between degrees of sublime and i’m testing your best with the least of my mind. come forward and put forth your rhyme. . MANA love your anamana gram ;) .

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Date: 3/4/2010 4:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading you.I love anagrams so much..and cross words too..keep up the good work Izzy..love your ana mana gram:)Charma
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:39:00 PM
That was composed of both wit and a bit of elitist humor lol good job Izzy =) Sang
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:53:00 AM
I ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM TODAY. GREAT WORK..
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:52:00 AM
"I scratched a ptach into grains of sand" ..dynamic girlfriend.. such a great tribute to all anamana.. thankxxx.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:35:00 AM
Beautiful... Full of creativity.. Unique my dear friend... Thank you for all of your kind comments.....:JP]
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:25:00 AM
Awesome Mana Izzy. Welcome back, and thanks for your comments today. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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