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Redamancy

Hands falter, shaking. I long to tell you, to speak. Will you ever know my love? You blush beside me. I’m waiting for you, move first. Love for you ever patient.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/6/2024 6:31:00 AM

Nice Makala. Maybe you should be the first to move. ;) Congratulations! :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/5/2024 1:04:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Meanwhile.... Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this delightful and delighting sedoka. Your first poem is a winner. God bless you.

Karen Croft

Date: 3/4/2024 4:00:00 AM

Loved this! Waiting for the first move is so nerve racking!

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/4/2024 12:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Makala. It is an enjoyable read. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Regards, Suzette