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Contest: Time for dessert - Acrostic challenge 2, sponsored by Andrea Dietrich.

Red Velvet Cake

Rich, with a hint of chocolate.
Every piece is decadent.
Delicious, creamy, and with white frosting.

Varies among cream cheese, buttercream or boiled.
Every birthday I would ask for one.
Layered high with boiled frosting.
Velvety smooth on your tongue, great for
Easter, Christmas or any holiday, and
Traditions of the past.

Cheerful and fond memories of my grandmother.
Always making bakery grade sweets and
Keeping her recipes hidden, written in French.
Every memory of her baking brings me joy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. I enjoyed reading. What a wonderful write for a great cake. Sounds/looks heavenly. Sure wish I had a slice. Great Picture... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Kitchin Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Paula, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations, Tania. I especially love this wonderful cake as a dessert
Kitchin Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Andrea, thank you and thank you for my placement. It was a fun contest.
Daniel Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 1:51 AM
Looks tempting, Tania:)
Kitchin Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 1:07 PM
Joanna, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:36 AM
A well-composed acrostic, which I am forbidden to eat.
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:39 AM
Victor, thank you. Everyone needs a little indulgence once in a while
George Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 6:46 PM
A delicious and lovely poem rich with cream cheese and nostalgic memories! All the best!
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:39 AM
Valsa, thank you.
G  Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 1:05 PM
I've never heard of boiled frosting - red velvet always look so nice but I've not had a nice one here in the UK - I think they just colour them only. Lovely poem and love the nostalgic touch - good luck for the contest :)
Kitchin Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 2:32 PM
LG, thank you. It's called old fashioned boiled frosting.
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 7:22 AM
I could just eat a slice of that now Tania, mmmm. Well composed acrostic. Happy Easter. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 11:30 AM
Tom, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 4:47 AM
No sweets for me, alas. Great acoustic. Looks perfect.
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 4:49 AM
Victor, thank you.
Lane Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 6:04 PM
Good entry.Tania. I’ve always liked the icing more than the cake.
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 4:01 AM
Lin, thank you.
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 4:50 PM
I have never tried it with the white frosting but from your vivid description it does look and sound delicious. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan x
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 4:02 AM
Jan, thank you.
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