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Red Storm

red storm hovers on swallows craning long necks… night traffic (c) Charles Henderson's Juxtaposition Haiku, now for Nate's Your Best Haiku by nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/22/2012 5:28:00 PM

belated congrats on you Nette, those words are stunning :) - Hug, Yanny

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 11:06:00 AM

Great work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Gail Debole

Date: 11/20/2012 3:56:00 PM

Hi Nette - Many congratulations on your win! - Gail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 9:53:00 PM

Hey, Nette, nice to see you on this winners list. Congrats. I hope you are doing well and no asthma problems lately?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2012 2:43:00 PM

Nette,,, xox~ :-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2012 10:10:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Nette! love and hugs, Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 2:00:00 AM

CONGRATS ON WINNING AN HM NETTE LUV FOR THIS ENGAGING HAIKU ..

Nathan D.

Date: 11/18/2012 9:38:00 PM

good haiku' Nate

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/25/2012 1:21:00 PM

Awesome!! Congrats nette on your fabulous win with this brilliant piece of haiku...huggs

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/25/2012 10:03:00 AM

Congrats on your wonderful win, Nette! Love, Kim

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/24/2012 11:49:00 AM

Beautiful and nice Haiku,Nette.Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest...

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/24/2012 8:01:00 AM

congrats on your win with this wonderful Haiku. harry

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/24/2012 5:56:00 AM

Thanks so much for letting me know! perhaps swallows strain their necks..would lift any confusion? Light & Love Always!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2012 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Nette. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2012 4:34:00 AM

Congrats Nette on a top win.Really enjoyed it!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/24/2012 4:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your deserved win dear Nette.What a powerful haiku-Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2012 8:48:00 PM

Awesome, NEtte. way to go in the contest. It's really nice imagery.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/23/2012 6:58:00 PM

Congrats to you AGAIN, Nette...you are always on a roll!! Love this image..you don't like traffic at all, do you!! ha ha. Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/23/2012 5:30:00 PM

very interesting one nette it's got me puzzled? swallows don't have long necks hmmm cranes do? some people who swallow have long necks? and there would be traffic around people? grrrr I hate it when I don't get theings 'teach me nette' Congrad's Light & Love

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/23/2012 5:19:00 PM

So glad to be able to place this poem so high. I felt just that way the last time I drove around Richmond at night.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/23/2012 12:23:00 PM

Wow! What a creative haiku by you Nette.Very good imagery.I really love it.Best wishes.Visit me if you are still awake.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2012 12:14:00 PM

Well I don't know exactly of what you speak but reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..The red storm is what I am not sure about..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/23/2012 11:28:00 AM

Wow, what descriptiveness you have shown within this poem! The juxtaposition in this write is truly a great one! I really enjoyed this poem this afternoon my friend! Nette, Great Work!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/23/2012 11:12:00 AM

A great haiku for the contest with terrific juxtaposition. I think it is a winner. See you on the winners list! Blessings, Rhonda :)