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Red Rose Rules - Anacreontic Verse

RED ROSE RULES ~anacreontic verse~ Guard by blue skies on green meadows the lover's roll, a dash of love cause cheeks to blush a classic style, a charming act from nature's art-- to tease her mind, to please her heart. Her smile so bright, he want this right: the scents so pure among all blooms his red rose rules freed from fear shy lips reveal thoughts long hidden from her muse. Eyes wide open hands to her face casting same spell, orbs magnetize on feelings so bliss. They don't want to miss, they start to kiss only the breeze, the birds, the trees witness this tryst. _____________________________ 8:14 pm; January 06, 2015
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A   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Olive, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
Onclaud Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 11:49 AM
soo well done, eloi.. huge congrats!..huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:49 AM
How lovely Olive.. loved reading today.. congrats on big win.
Williams Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 11:33 PM
This makes my heart beat a little faster. Congratulations on your win.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Olive,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat...
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 5:20 PM
absolutely breathtaking Olive I think young James inspired this gem of a poem:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Well done and congrats on your win. Thank you for entering :)
Makama Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:53 PM
ahhh, is this you with James!! I bet he inspires many of your charming romantic poems these days!!
Callus Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:19 PM
This is lovely Olive_eloi! No wonder he falls for his special red rose who attracts with her beauty and attraction. ~ I hope that she did not ruffle her petals:) Hugs // paul
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Weeeee...back with merited congratulations on this podium finish, Olive_eloi! ~~ paul
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 1:35 PM
VERY EXPRESSIVE AND CREATIVE WORK..IF FOR A CONTEST, SHOULD BE IN THE WINNER'S LINE UP..THANKS FOR DROPPING BY..SARA
Fraser Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Your words flow Olive as beautiful as the Roses petals are caressed by a Summer breeze. The more one reads, the more stunning it becomes. To my fav's it goes ~~ hugs & smiles aplenty ~~ James xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 8:41 PM
James, thanks much for adding it to your faves.. =`)~~~~hugs and more soon, Olive Eloisa =`)
Sage Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:37 PM
beautiful write Olive...
Scars Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Beautiful flow Olive, wonderful write...*smiles*
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:28 AM
- So lovely written, dear Olive ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Oh yes truly an amazing poem, the flow of superb,
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:41 PM
thank you so much HArry.. =`) I'm glad you like it.. =`)
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Amazing write, Olive. Thanks for sharing the delight of your pen
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:24 AM
thanks much Skat.. =`) weeeeee, I just made the rose a symbol here.. =`)
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