Red Rasberries Wait

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                                       Red rasberries wait
                              Falling  toward ground to splat...
                                     Hand catches mid-air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/20/2010 4:43:00 AM
my gosh the image is so salivating and so natural and real therefor romantic...how i love to wallow in the thought,,,thanks for sharing...^_^ v
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Date: 6/15/2010 2:57:00 PM
Are they wild raspberries Sara, McYummy. I can taste them from here, with their sharp tang >> enjoyable Haiku >> James
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Date: 6/14/2010 8:34:00 AM
Nice to learn that you've got your own raspberries---lucky your are!! I have to buy them as they are on of my favourite fruits!!! Enjoyed reading your Haiku, Sara and thank you for commenting my "Green Woodpecker". Weather her is not bad as it differs most of the time to the western part of Germany. We've got a sunny sky and 70° F. ...All the best...Gert
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:46:00 AM
so you have rasberries?
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:06:00 AM
Usually the birds get there first Sara.Early bird etc etc Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:53:00 PM
This one is awesome. I love raspberries. A FAV!!
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:10:00 PM
A wonderful one. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:48:00 PM
My raspberries are just starting to bloom in fact we just tied them up because they are heavy. Soon we will have our hands catching them in mid air. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:17:00 PM
lovely one Sarah....
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:09:00 PM
I just love raspberries, we used to go picking them in the wild, when I was a child, this brought back, wonderful memories.. love Constance
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:05:00 PM
really enjoyable, did you see it coming. well Sara nicely done, & have yourself a wonderful one,..p.d.
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