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Red Rasberries Wait

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                                       Red rasberries wait
                              Falling  toward ground to splat...
                                     Hand catches mid-air

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Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 6/20/2010 4:43:00 AM

my gosh the image is so salivating and so natural and real therefor romantic...how i love to wallow in the thought,,,thanks for sharing...^_^ v

James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2010 2:57:00 PM

Are they wild raspberries Sara, McYummy. I can taste them from here, with their sharp tang >> enjoyable Haiku >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/14/2010 8:34:00 AM

Nice to learn that you've got your own raspberries---lucky your are!! I have to buy them as they are on of my favourite fruits!!! Enjoyed reading your Haiku, Sara and thank you for commenting my "Green Woodpecker". Weather her is not bad as it differs most of the time to the western part of Germany. We've got a sunny sky and 70° F. ...All the best...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/14/2010 7:46:00 AM

so you have rasberries?

Brian Strand

Date: 6/14/2010 12:06:00 AM

Usually the birds get there first Sara.Early bird etc etc Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2010 11:53:00 PM

This one is awesome. I love raspberries. A FAV!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/13/2010 9:10:00 PM

A wonderful one. Good luck in the contest

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/13/2010 7:48:00 PM

My raspberries are just starting to bloom in fact we just tied them up because they are heavy. Soon we will have our hands catching them in mid air. God Bless Phyl