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Red Heaven On Earth

Driving by a picturesque lake paradise The scene serene a pleasure to eyes Watching the moon overhead Shining with rays spread Lights totter Red On water Looking like rose bed Shifting shadows on chrome red Liquid glowing beneath crimson skies Driving by a picturesque lake paradise
11/16/18

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Date: 11/18/2018 10:46:00 AM
Great imagery, your poem is fitting for that photo.. Nice shape also..
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Date: 11/16/2018 9:23:00 PM
I was enchanted by your breathtaking imagery, Jo. Superb poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/16/2018 8:07:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful jo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2018 7:23:00 AM
Your poem is as beautiful as the image you posted with it. Absolutely gorgeous my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2018 6:44:00 AM
- Beautiful like a ruby   ... the queen of all color stones, Jo :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2018 5:59:00 AM
Beautifully done, Jo..a reflection of the photo in your colorful words. I like the creative design of your poem..it mimics the reflection.
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Date: 11/16/2018 5:25:00 AM
Nicely done!!
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