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Red Creek

Red clay creek water, Run swiftly, fullness proding you, swirling madness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/15/2009 4:53:00 AM
Fasinating Haiku Doris. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 6:42:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku, Doris, vividly alive. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/14/2009 6:02:00 PM
We too have a lot of red clay in No California....Just like what happens around here!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/14/2009 2:59:00 PM
A vivid picture of a natural scene. You can almost see the water. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/14/2009 1:43:00 PM
I haven't been by to see if they are up but I know that they are. Nicely done Haiku. Keep writing. Mom
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