Red Cardinal in Pale Hand

Red cardinal in pale hand
under mottled white moon.
Stoic, the princess
and the bright hued bird.
Her cute little beak,
crimson blush; long, straight
flaxen hair; eyes closed.
She’s dreaming
of gilded-orb planets.
Her sight is unlimited,
and her attention is slight
to her glitzy crown
and her gown
ablaze with red and gold.
To this teen, asleep
she’s floating
in the dark of night;
she’ll awaken
to a palette, blue spruce,
and trilling of
“Cheer cheer cheer.”
A brush on the ready
in her pale palm.
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Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 6:16 PM
Charming and delightful, Kim
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 5:51 PM
loved the feeling of cheerfulness....impressive Ekphrasis love red cardinals....lots of them are around here right now.
Magdalinos Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 9:11 AM
Dear Kim, an enchanted poem! Have a blessed day
Hind Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 5:23 PM
Very dreamy- otherworldlike. You have achieved with this again, dear KIM <3
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 5:44 PM
Thank you, Paige :)
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 12:02 PM
What a sweet dream, filled with beauty and magic! I thoroughly enjoyed this, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 1:07 PM
So glad you read this one! Hugs
Roper Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 9:49 AM
Great imagery and feeling in your canvas poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 10:01 AM
Thank you, Eve!
DiMino Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 1:45 AM
Wow! I say it again, Wow...great poetry. "she’ll awaken to a palette, blue spruce, and trilling of “Cheer cheer cheer.” A brush on the ready in her pale palm." -- Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Thank you, Joe!!
Brotherton Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 2:11 PM
A wonderful write, Kim. Cardinals were my mother's favorite. When they visit my feeder now, it's like she is watching over me. Thanks for the beautiful words.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 5:55 AM
Saw a red cardinal one Easter morning after Easter sunrise service making such a ruckus (like a burning bush). Yea, definitely thought of my mom. Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 8:46 AM
Cardinals are beautiful birds. A lovely poem. Your imagery is astounding.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 1:30 PM
You touch my heart! Thank you kindly, Victor!
Rodgers Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 7:47 AM
Dear Kim, I love Cardinals! There’s such tenderness in how you frame the princess, eyes closed, imagination wide open, already living in worlds she hasn’t touched yet. The cardinal perched in her hand becomes this tiny ember of wonder, a guide almost, and the whole poem is filled with that quiet magic of someone on the edge of becoming. Winter Blessings, Kim, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 1:30 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate what you see! Warm Winter blessings
Gentile Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Kim, such delicate and fragile beauty emanates from the images created by your sweet and lovely words! Just wonderful! Happy Wednesday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 6:56 AM
Have a blessed Wednesday, Mike! Thank you!
Godwin Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 4:38 AM
I found this so intriguing, the words and imagery so delicious, that I read it three times. IMPRESSIVE
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs xx
Jones Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 2:52 AM
A fun read!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Thank you, Karen! xx
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