Red

Crimson twilight, stained glass sunsets bled Frost tipped flowers of summers fled Migrating flocks, southwards led Gatherings to break bread Chrysanthemum spread Autumnal bed Overhead Wind sped Red 11/07/19 For 'Rhyming Nonet' contest Sponsor: charles messina

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/28/2019 4:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2019 11:54:00 AM

LOVE this one!!! Congrats on the win, Michelle.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/15/2019 12:50:00 PM

Hi Michelle, a clever and powerful write, no wonder you received a very deserved win - Congrats Michelle. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/15/2019 8:53:00 PM

Much appreciate it, thank you, Jennifer-

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2019 4:25:00 PM

Back with congrats on your winner n the contest, Michelle! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/14/2019 5:03:00 PM

Thanks, gw, always glad to hear from you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2019 1:18:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Michelle :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/14/2019 5:02:00 PM

Appreciate your kind comment, Anne-Lise.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/14/2019 6:49:00 AM

Hi Michelle, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/14/2019 5:01:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/13/2019 7:38:00 PM

Stunning imagery, Michelle. Love the beauty of this. Congratulations on you win in my contest. ~Charlie

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/14/2019 5:01:00 PM

Thank you for the placement in your contest, charles!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/8/2019 4:21:00 AM

This is one of the outstanding entries, Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/8/2019 3:33:00 PM

That is so kind of you, Caren!

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/7/2019 7:39:00 PM

beautiful and clever entry for the contest, this one just unfolds so much beauty through each line....well done! hugs

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/8/2019 3:32:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Sandra.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/7/2019 4:15:00 PM

Primary colour wins! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/7/2019 6:49:00 PM

Red is ahead, he said :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/7/2019 3:39:00 PM

You have created a broad canvas-worth of stunning images here, my friend. I like this one for the contest! Warmest wishes, Gershon (Soup mail, please)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/7/2019 6:47:00 PM

I am always glad of your generous support, Gershon!

Chris Green

Date: 11/7/2019 3:06:00 PM

Nicely done Michelle. This was beautiful. Best wishes in the contest.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/7/2019 6:46:00 PM

Thanks much, Chris.