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The house and barn have surrendered,
burrowing under the loose dirt of the sun.
Echoes run from house to barn, from barn to house,
a ritornello hurried along on the skirts of the wind.

In the ruined barn, decay finds its own language,
children still run here.
A transmission has leached from puttering feet;
it rattles the bones of embalmed mice.
A soundtrack of texture
running from barn to house - from house to barn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Soooo cool. I just came back from a trip to the country, intensely observing fallen barns and deserted houses as I do. Love this.
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August 31, 2019 at 7:52 AM
I should, but no. I am a visual artist though, so such is how I view the world.
Ashford Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Hey thanks Maureen, do you take photographs? I like to stop and capture the crumbling barns and homesteads. I like to record nature overtaking the structures, or image the layers of history in them. Anyway, have a great rest of the day! Thanks again.
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