Recollections

I passed this way so many days 
and wondered on the by way;
who had opened, what had filled
the gap within the shed's bay.

The opening small in the wall
at once so spare and luring,
like crooked teeth in gap toothed maw 
now held field mice burrowing.

Barn boards of red formed a strange bed
for ripe feed of golden maze,
and the cedar shingles sheltered 
the bounty of by gone days.

The farm was gone, no children born
to pass their day time in play.
Just bitter sweet and memories
and old corn cobs which strayed. 

Yet here it stands, as I pass by,
and softly recalls for me; 
The true joy of by-gone laughter
and autumn jamborees.

All that was once America,
the farm, the land and the free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 7, 2013 at 11:45 AM
Debbie:) CONGRATULATIONS! Enjoyed your win............... Love ~SKAT~
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November 6, 2013 at 7:37 PM
D G, nicely done.... congrats in Frank's contest.... xox~ LINDA
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November 4, 2013 at 10:59 PM
the countryside, let us always treasure, debbie... kudos to you for a stunning win..:) huggs
Mehta Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 9:55 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Frank, Debbie
Johnson Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 7:43 PM
I too like old barns and always notice when on is gone from the scene. congratulations on a great win. Love, joyce
Posey Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 6:23 PM
Debbie, I especially enjoyed this one.. The last two lines added class that was not needed but was appreciated... congratulations... Jake
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October 4, 2010 at 4:45 AM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in Paula Swanson's contest "Pass". Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on this beautiful write, Deb! Worthy of the placement, surely! Peace, love, Audrey
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October 3, 2010 at 7:53 AM
This is beautiful..congrats on your fine win..BG
Mehta Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Debbie
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October 3, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Congrats Debbie on your win in the Pass contest.. enjoy this super Sunday with luv..
Richards Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 8:49 AM
another lovely poem, Debbie...so "Frost" in my mind! ~ Carrie
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January 10, 2009 at 1:46 PM
wow nice* liked it lotz....Maryam
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