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Spiritual Birth

grace will find you when thoughts fade away crushed with unbearable grief "losing your mind" suffering during a dark night of the soul the ego crumbles; revealing the light your soul consciousness "finding yourself" directly experiencing the divine sense of oneness where everything is connected at a deeper level there is but one consciousness appearing as many "awakened" breathless views are available with inner focus crossing a chasm with one final leap of faith you become blissful; radiating like the sun "experiencing enlightenment" revived with a new perspective humans are never perfect but our pure being is "love"

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 3/13/2023 6:58:00 AM

Your beautiful poem resonates with me. Love it! :-)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 3/4/2023 11:13:00 AM

Perfectly said! Congratulations on a masterpiece of a poem.

Rasitha Ranasinghe

Date: 7/16/2022 9:12:00 AM

Well deserved winning. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2022 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What an amazing write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/15/2022 6:58:00 AM

This is beautiful and I sincerely believe we will experience completely pure love when we reach heaven's shores. Wonderful write. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2022 1:28:00 AM

A very beautiful creation. congratulations!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/14/2022 9:13:00 PM

Dear P.M., it’s such a pleasure to return and indulge in your insight once again. I adore the depth and breadth of this exquisite poem. “breathless views are available with inner focus”.. the beauty and wisdom of this piece leaves me breathless. Congratulations for your excellent win in Unseeking Seeker’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/14/2022 8:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win, PM! A rare gem, indeed. Thanks for sharing

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2020 5:25:00 PM

P.M., your spiritual poem is inspiring in its moving beauty. I, too, believe that our pure being is "love". The shape of your poem reflects the deep significance of your words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Greg Gaul

Date: 1/23/2019 8:09:00 AM

Buddhists call it rebirth, not reincarnation. You reveal yourself. Clearly you are on the noble path. Few are. I'll have to look further to see how it enhances your poetic voice which I already know is strong. Congratulations on your placement. You have cracked open your Buddhaself.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/22/2019 1:36:00 PM

You wrote beautifully of the rebirth of love during times of spiritual challenges, P.M. And I have experienced this transition many times. We fall, only to elevate once more and overcome. Congratulations on your win in Chantelle's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

Eve Roper

Date: 12/28/2018 8:43:00 PM

Wow!! I enjoyed reading this great poem,P.M. , very well written and the shape fabulous. Coagulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/28/2018 4:10:00 PM

Beautiful and touching. Congrats on your win, PM.

Vicki Acquah

Date: 12/8/2018 7:53:00 PM

Oh my so glad I got to read this. "there is but one consciousness appearing as many" "awakened"...favorite... see me add this to my Favorites on fB" My Favorite Poems By Other Poets"

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/7/2018 6:50:00 PM

Hello P.M.Richter, I like this beautiful created poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2018 7:41:00 AM

P.M. your insightful poem is filled with truth and inspiration. Your last three lines sum up our creation so magnificently! : )

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/17/2018 11:07:00 PM

"breathless views are available with inner focus crossing a chasm with one final leap of faith you become blissful; radiating like the sun "experiencing enlightenment"; a well done spiritual poem; love these lines.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 10:03:00 AM

This is so true; beautifully penned.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/4/2018 6:21:00 PM

Yes, I completely agree. God's Love is Unconditional. You are right, there is a Spiritual Birth. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is beautiful. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/1/2018 7:19:00 AM

Dear P.M., this entire poem appealed to my spiritual side in such a deeply profound and truthful way, that I FAVed it. I really truly love this poem! I believe all real love is pure, and the purest all exude love.