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Spiritual Birth

grace will find you when thoughts fade away crushed with unbearable grief "losing your mind" suffering during a dark night of the soul the ego crumbles; revealing the light your soul consciousness "finding yourself" directly experiencing the divine sense of oneness where everything is connected at a deeper level there is but one consciousness appearing as many "awakened" breathless views are available with inner focus crossing a chasm with one final leap of faith you become blissful; radiating like the sun "experiencing enlightenment" revived with a new perspective humans are never perfect but our pure being is "love"

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Date: 9/9/2020 5:25:00 PM
P.M., your spiritual poem is inspiring in its moving beauty. I, too, believe that our pure being is "love". The shape of your poem reflects the deep significance of your words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/23/2019 8:09:00 AM
Buddhists call it rebirth, not reincarnation. You reveal yourself. Clearly you are on the noble path. Few are. I'll have to look further to see how it enhances your poetic voice which I already know is strong. Congratulations on your placement. You have cracked open your Buddhaself.
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Date: 1/22/2019 1:36:00 PM
You wrote beautifully of the rebirth of love during times of spiritual challenges, P.M. And I have experienced this transition many times. We fall, only to elevate once more and overcome. Congratulations on your win in Chantelle's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2019 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! I was overwhelmed with joy and pure happiness when reading this gem. Well done!
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Date: 12/28/2018 8:43:00 PM
Wow!! I enjoyed reading this great poem,P.M. , very well written and the shape fabulous. Coagulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/28/2018 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful and touching. Congrats on your win, PM.
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Date: 12/8/2018 7:53:00 PM
Oh my so glad I got to read this. "there is but one consciousness appearing as many" "awakened"...favorite... see me add this to my Favorites on fB" My Favorite Poems By Other Poets"
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Date: 12/7/2018 6:50:00 PM
Hello P.M.Richter, I like this beautiful created poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/20/2018 7:41:00 AM
P.M. your insightful poem is filled with truth and inspiration. Your last three lines sum up our creation so magnificently! : )
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Date: 11/17/2018 11:07:00 PM
"breathless views are available with inner focus crossing a chasm with one final leap of faith you become blissful; radiating like the sun "experiencing enlightenment"; a well done spiritual poem; love these lines.
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Date: 11/6/2018 10:03:00 AM
This is so true; beautifully penned.
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Date: 11/4/2018 6:21:00 PM
Yes, I completely agree. God's Love is Unconditional. You are right, there is a Spiritual Birth. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is beautiful. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/1/2018 7:19:00 AM
Dear P.M., this entire poem appealed to my spiritual side in such a deeply profound and truthful way, that I FAVed it. I really truly love this poem! I believe all real love is pure, and the purest all exude love.
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