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Spiritual Birth

  
grace will find you
when thoughts fade away
crushed with unbearable grief
"losing your mind"

suffering during a dark night of the soul
the ego crumbles; revealing the light
your soul consciousness
"finding yourself"

directly experiencing the divine sense of oneness
where everything is connected at a deeper level
there is but one consciousness appearing as many
"awakened"

breathless views are available with inner focus
crossing a chasm with one final leap of faith
you become blissful; radiating like the sun
"experiencing enlightenment"

revived with a new perspective
humans are never perfect
but our pure being is
"love"

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Anne E Sangster - K Date: 3/13/2023 6:58:00 AM Your beautiful poem resonates with me. Love it! :-) Login to Reply

Frances Schiavina Date: 3/4/2023 11:13:00 AM Perfectly said! Congratulations on a masterpiece of a poem. Login to Reply

Rasitha Ranasinghe Date: 7/16/2022 9:12:00 AM Well deserved winning. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/15/2022 2:24:00 PM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What an amazing write. Have a great/blessed day....................... Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/15/2022 6:58:00 AM This is beautiful and I sincerely believe we will experience completely pure love when we reach heaven's shores. Wonderful write. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/15/2022 1:28:00 AM A very beautiful creation. congratulations! Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 7/14/2022 9:13:00 PM Dear P.M., it’s such a pleasure to return and indulge in your insight once again. I adore the depth and breadth of this exquisite poem. “breathless views are available with inner focus”.. the beauty and wisdom of this piece leaves me breathless. Congratulations for your excellent win in Unseeking Seeker’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 7/14/2022 8:33:00 PM Congratulations on your top win, PM! A rare gem, indeed. Thanks for sharing Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 9/9/2020 5:25:00 PM P.M., your spiritual poem is inspiring in its moving beauty. I, too, believe that our pure being is "love". The shape of your poem reflects the deep significance of your words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Greg Gaul Date: 1/23/2019 8:09:00 AM Buddhists call it rebirth, not reincarnation. You reveal yourself. Clearly you are on the noble path. Few are. I'll have to look further to see how it enhances your poetic voice which I already know is strong. Congratulations on your placement. You have cracked open your Buddhaself. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/22/2019 1:36:00 PM You wrote beautifully of the rebirth of love during times of spiritual challenges, P.M. And I have experienced this transition many times. We fall, only to elevate once more and overcome. Congratulations on your win in Chantelle's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/28/2018 8:43:00 PM Wow!! I enjoyed reading this great poem,P.M. , very well written and the shape fabulous. Coagulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 12/28/2018 4:10:00 PM Beautiful and touching. Congrats on your win, PM. Login to Reply

Vicki Acquah Date: 12/8/2018 7:53:00 PM Oh my so glad I got to read this. "there is but one consciousness appearing as many" "awakened"...favorite... see me add this to my Favorites on fB" My Favorite Poems By Other Poets" Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 12/7/2018 6:50:00 PM Hello P.M.Richter, I like this beautiful created poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/20/2018 7:41:00 AM P.M. your insightful poem is filled with truth and inspiration. Your last three lines sum up our creation so magnificently! : ) Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 11/17/2018 11:07:00 PM "breathless views are available with inner focus crossing a chasm with one final leap of faith you become blissful; radiating like the sun "experiencing enlightenment"; a well done spiritual poem; love these lines. Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 11/6/2018 10:03:00 AM This is so true; beautifully penned. Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 11/4/2018 6:21:00 PM Yes, I completely agree. God's Love is Unconditional. You are right, there is a Spiritual Birth. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is beautiful. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 11/1/2018 7:19:00 AM Dear P.M., this entire poem appealed to my spiritual side in such a deeply profound and truthful way, that I FAVed it. I really truly love this poem! I believe all real love is pure, and the purest all exude love. Login to Reply