Rebirth

The passing years
through trembling fingers slip,
like worry beads
unsurely strung
along life’s fraying thread.

Sages, seers and cynics peer
and say when it will snap,
but why regard the 
sing-song whine of those who
seldom glimpse their own demise?

Mysteries and magic
ventures, bold and tragic—
reason, rhyme and rhetoric—
will someday undistinguished lie
inside life’s tome, its legion seals intact.

But should some day a mighty hand 
this fearsome book disturb
and turn the page that lets me fly,
on fairest wings of reborn time
I’d soar and find my way back home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:04 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Thanks for your visit. I like your use of metaphor to get your thoughts across visually.
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Wonderful win.... SKAT
Peterson Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Thank you Skat, always there, you are: the indefatigable one.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Really well expressed, congrats.
Deschler Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Congrats on 4th place!... If I were reborn, I would find my way back home, too... I enjoyed this deep and very well written poem. Really great work, Mark!
Peterson Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Thank you, Kelly. I appreciated being part of the contest and getting a placement.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:40 PM
a thought provoking write Mark congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Peterson Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 1:09 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. I owe you a visit.
Davis Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Mark What a thought provoking and deep write. Full of emotion and feeling that takes the reader into your heart and soul. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Vampire poem.
Peterson Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 12:58 AM
Wonderful words from you, Robin. Stop by again, and I'll do you same with you.
That Archaic Poet Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Another gem and another poem of yours I greatly enjoyed. Awesome piece, my friend! :)
Peterson Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 8:09 PM
Thanks so very much. Bundled figures of speech that somehow seemed to turn out, if I am to believe better poets, which I keenly do!
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