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Rebirth

The passing years through trembling fingers slip, like worry beads unsurely strung along life’s fraying thread. Sages, seers and cynics peer and say when it will snap, but why regard the sing-song whine of those who seldom glimpse their own demise? Mysteries and magic ventures, bold and tragic— reason, rhyme and rhetoric— will someday undistinguished lie inside life’s tome, its legion seals intact. But should some day a mighty hand this fearsome book disturb and turn the page that lets me fly, on fairest wings of reborn time I’d soar and find my way back home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/10/2016 9:04:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Thanks for your visit. I like your use of metaphor to get your thoughts across visually.
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Date: 8/17/2015 2:42:00 PM
Wonderful win.... SKAT
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Mark Peterson
Date: 8/22/2015 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Skat, always there, you are: the indefatigable one.
Date: 8/16/2015 9:12:00 AM
Really well expressed, congrats.
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Date: 8/15/2015 2:18:00 PM
Congrats on 4th place!... If I were reborn, I would find my way back home, too... I enjoyed this deep and very well written poem. Really great work, Mark!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 8/22/2015 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly. I appreciated being part of the contest and getting a placement.
Date: 8/15/2015 1:40:00 PM
a thought provoking write Mark congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Peterson
Date: 8/22/2015 1:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. I owe you a visit.
Date: 12/6/2013 9:21:00 PM
Mark What a thought provoking and deep write. Full of emotion and feeling that takes the reader into your heart and soul. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Vampire poem.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 12/7/2013 12:58:00 AM
Wonderful words from you, Robin. Stop by again, and I'll do you same with you.
Date: 11/2/2013 12:06:00 PM
Another gem and another poem of yours I greatly enjoyed. Awesome piece, my friend! :)
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Mark Peterson
Date: 11/2/2013 8:09:00 PM
Thanks so very much. Bundled figures of speech that somehow seemed to turn out, if I am to believe better poets, which I keenly do!

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