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Rebirth--Long Distance Love

In low tones we chatted On the steps to her porch, We talked of the decades Since I’d carried her torch— Of love we knew nothing During young naïve years Of kissing and fondling ‘Til I left her in tears, For the navy enticed With ships and adventure: I sailed away keenly Aware that I missed her, Each ivory cloud roiling I watched sculpt her face, And the foam in ships’ wakes Emulated her grace. How her leer glowered down With each floozy I’d bed; Her glare did accost me From the face that I wed. But that marriage was fey, On a short vine it died: I had loved only once So to find her I tried: Thus we sat on those steps Last night swapping stories, We confessed of our lives, Our failures and glories … And the kiss that welled up While lightning bugs popped, Led haltingly bedside Where our slack clothing dropped. We then gripped and embraced Through a torrent of mirth— Time relented at last And our love found rebirth. October 14, 2016 Long Distance Love Contest Nicola Byrne

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Date: 10/24/2016 5:47:00 AM
A captivating, romantic piece!!! Congrats David, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/21/2016 9:36:00 AM
I absolutely love this one. Such good writing! :)
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:30:00 PM
Hi David, I really enjoyed the build up of this piece. Nice imagery and content. The last line" And An our love found rebirth" was so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:02:00 PM
A fantastic story David...congrats
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Date: 10/15/2016 8:53:00 PM
A very sweet love story, that I relate to and is delightfully written, you covered all the basis of young love broached many years later. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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