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Rebirth--Long Distance Love

In low tones we chatted
On the steps to her porch,
We talked of the decades
Since I’d carried her torch—

Of love we knew nothing
During young naïve years
Of kissing and fondling
‘Til I left her in tears,

For the navy enticed
With ships and adventure:
I sailed away keenly
Aware that I missed her,

Each ivory cloud roiling
I watched sculpt her face,
And the foam in ships’ wakes
Emulated her grace.

How her leer glowered down
With each floozy I’d bed;
Her glare did accost me
From the face that I wed.

But that marriage was fey,
On a short vine it died:
I had loved only once
So to find her I tried:

Thus we sat on those steps
Last night swapping stories,
We confessed of our lives,
Our failures and glories …

And the kiss that welled up
While lightning bugs popped,
Led haltingly bedside
Where our slack clothing dropped.

We then gripped and embraced
Through a torrent of mirth—
Time relented at last
And our love found rebirth. 


October 14, 2016
Long Distance Love Contest
Nicola Byrne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/24/2016 5:47:00 AM
A captivating, romantic piece!!! Congrats David, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/21/2016 9:36:00 AM
I absolutely love this one. Such good writing! :)
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:30:00 PM
Hi David, I really enjoyed the build up of this piece. Nice imagery and content. The last line" And An our love found rebirth" was so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:02:00 PM
A fantastic story David...congrats
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Date: 10/15/2016 8:53:00 PM
A very sweet love story, that I relate to and is delightfully written, you covered all the basis of young love broached many years later. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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