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Realizing Winter

Realizing winter Where is the sun as I walk through the valley Clouds seem to follow where ever I go Hidden behind every dream warmed of promise Now broken hearted and covered in snow Spring disappeared like my smile in the garden Lost in the floating grey mist of the sky Fall left its mark in its teardrop leaves falling Colorful memories drowned as I cry Summer, my hope ran away like my shadow Left me alone in the heat of the day So here I am in a place cold and frozen Realizing winter was now here to stay Good night Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/27/2018 9:38:00 AM
I will say hi to the snowman, it is wet, heavy snow, perfect for making him :)
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Date: 11/26/2018 8:20:00 PM
I am getting another foot of snow tonight , early winter and dreaming of Spring. Great poem with emotions and nature :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Say hi to the snowman for me when you build him. :)
Date: 10/26/2018 8:56:00 AM
Cleverly put together. Sweet.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2018 11:58:00 AM
Thanks so much. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 10/25/2018 12:04:00 PM
Shiver me timbers, mate!! :) gw
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2018 1:53:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend
Date: 10/25/2018 7:55:00 AM
Love this - in its teardrop leaves falling Colorful memories drowned as I cry. Blessings, Chris! <3 Kim
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim.
Date: 10/24/2018 10:05:00 PM
Eloquent melancholy my friend, xomo, good night!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much Maureen.
Date: 10/24/2018 6:21:00 PM
My sentiments exactly, Chris, if I could write them as you do.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I hope your days are warm and sunny soon.

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