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Realization of One Broken

A rose is guarded from prying hands By thorns along the stem Reality makes the truth known A heart can be kept safe From those who wish it maimed By icy spikes of bitterness And distrust Thorns are beautiful As are my own version of such a Godsend Serrated barbed wire That hurts both the offender and the prey It works both ways for us We had some bond That the fairy tales paled against Though what naive child was I to ignore The untamed look as you swept me off my feet And killed the innocnce I longed to preserve A wound carries infection When left untreated A shattered heart And useless dream Will not infect But most surely Scar My burning heart Bleeds for salt To make it worse And yet To make it feel so much better Now I have played my part And those thorns that once looked Deadly yet respectable Made me see Time does not always heal all wounds The memory will stay caught Onto those pikes of self preservation And your Betrayal within me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/26/2015 5:58:00 PM
Forrest, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:23:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Forrest. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 5:24:00 PM
A REAL STRONG POEM, AND MANY CONGRATULATIONS : ) ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK, HAVE A WONDERFUL WEEKEND,,Irma
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Forrest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:57:00 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:21:00 PM
ahhh a festering wound hurts only you for if they cared they would not have given it. Why give them this power over you? Light & Love excellent verse!
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:01:00 PM
I love the metophors in this, great emotion, congrats on being fetured this week. Judy Riley
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:21:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:24:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:26:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Forrest. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2010 9:32:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Forrest. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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