Reality Check

look deep in the mirror that’s it deeper still ~ yes you see, no pixels

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/12/2022 12:32:00 PM

I like your choice of Words, and I am so enjoying your Monoku's, unique and thought provoking David, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/13/2022 1:08:00 AM

Monokus are pretty short Jennifer, but I always hope the effect can be long lasting and meaningful, I’m delighted you consider them thought provoking, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/11/2022 2:34:00 PM

David, you've written a beautiful monoku here; it packs a lot of meaning into a very little number of syllables. Your eloquent use of language put more profound light on this piece of literature, which not only illustrates the enchantment of the mirror but also the incorporation of a newly discovered scientific sense of pixels.

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/11/2022 3:51:00 PM

Thank you Lasaad, I’m delighted you see so much meaning in my monoku, it has several messages the most obvious is, I believe that pixelated reality creates a manipulated life form of its own, whereas the mirror for better or worse brings us back into the pixel free real world, cheers David