Ready-Steady-Go

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Ready-steady-go, make thoughts slow Silence holds the bliss key Once ego mellow, heart aglow Each moment, joyful spree Know fears and desires bog Let not tail wag the dog Why flounder in a fog Love leads, we follow Ready-steady-go 11-November-2021 Quietus

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David Kavanagh

Date: 11/11/2021 9:31:00 AM

I know you speak with a good heart seeker, wisdom in all your poems, unfortunately we all don't have your eternal patience, I tend to ready steady BLOW, in a fast paced environment, enjoyable piece, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/11/2021 9:44:00 AM

Hahaha! We all are where we need to be for earth life experience. Enjoy! Ultimately we all will shift our attention from the external ephemeral to the internal eternal