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Reader of the Stars - Collaboration

A reader of the stars am I. I’ve looked into my crystal ball. Guess what I saw? The woman of your dreams! You will be hooked because her charms will fill your heart with awe. A female with green eyes and princess ways, she also has a bit of gypsy soul! With her you will be blessed all of your days. She is the other half to make you whole. She’ll challenge you; together you will grow. One other thing to know . . . curiously she very much seems to resemble me! Sept. 3, 2020 for Line Gauthier's Max 12 Lines - Poem-Inspired Prompt Poetry Contest You can see her little poem that inspired this collaboration over at the contest pages.

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/1/2020 6:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea! This is a very mysterious write. I like it a lot. Please keep on writing. You're so good at it. Love, Angie

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/12/2020 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, on our top win!! It's a great piece!!

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/13/2020 5:31:00 PM

No, Andrea, mine didn't get any placement in this.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/12/2020 7:16:00 PM

top?? Anyway, congrats to you too I guess. Did you get HM with me?

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/5/2020 5:31:00 PM

Hello Andrea … written so like the lines of a sonnet. Flow and rhyme just beaut as usual Andrea - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/5/2020 7:48:00 PM

thanks, it originally WAS a sonnet until I looked at her rules again and noticed it had a line limit, so it's pared down a bit!!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/5/2020 9:52:00 AM

Lol, a fun piece.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/5/2020 2:14:00 AM

Lovely and romantic, Andrea, and the ending comes with a smile:) Line will love it! Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2020 7:12:00 AM

" With her you will be blessed all of your days." And so it tis.. A truly wonderful verse and a magnificent and true message given on love, life and that which we should be more aware of my friend. A fav-- a gem too.. God bless..

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/4/2020 1:51:00 AM

So sweet, last part perfectly said! Very very neatly unfurling verse. Line will adore it!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/3/2020 8:23:00 PM

'A female with green eyes and princess ways, she also has a bit of gypsy soul!' Glad that you've still kept it. What a treasure it is. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/3/2020 4:33:00 PM

A very cute ending!

John Watt

Date: 9/3/2020 1:36:00 PM

This is adorable Andrea! You took those 6 phrases Line offered and made a compelling romantic sonnet with a fun surprise ending. A fave for me, I think you've penned a winner!