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Re-Awakened - Team Work Contest Poem 1

Her heart stirred, she smiled looking at the face she loved. His eyes mirrored hope remembering their lost love crushed by fate, re-awakened Penned on 26/08/2013 using Form : Tanka by Wayland Bunch and Seren Roberts Contest : Team Work

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Russell Sivey

Date: 8/28/2013 3:59:00 PM

This is so beautiful, such a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece, I just love the tenderness that's all about it! Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/28/2013 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Russell......Seren

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/28/2013 3:55:00 PM

I love the line 'his eyes mirrored hope'..Gives me the deep feel of re awekining and new beginnings to same old flames..Lovely.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/28/2013 4:18:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine for your kind comment ...Seren