Razzmatazz

Razzmatazz is a rustle of drizzle
hip hopping pops of baby raindrops 
June showers boogie on flowers
with trails of dripping cloud tails
Razzmatazz of blue jazz
playing on ceilings
ripples double
in summer
strolls!




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Debbie Guzzi’s  For Love of Language
By nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arowolo Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Wonderful write, Nette.Razzmatazz-nice choice of word,friend.Congratulations on your well deserved win..
Sweetheart Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 8:34 PM
ah yes Nette luv knew this would warrant big congrats .. so big congrats luv.. exceptional and extraordinary write .. as always luv..
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 7:23 PM
BIG congrats. I see you won. I just knew Debs would love it!
Dailey Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 9:28 AM
Your poem cooled me off on a hot day. Congratulations on your win. Mike
Beck Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 8:37 AM
excellent.....vastly superior to mine and others due to its clever internal rhyme and a host of other features....we're out of touch these days cos Too busy probably.....hope during the summer vacation t o renew ties huh? best regards as always young N
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest "For Love Of Language" Nette. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 3:38 AM
Awsome Nette!!! Good luck in the contest...wonderful beat...big huggsss,love deb
Situation Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 8:22 PM
razzmatazz is perefect improvisation.
Fitzgerald Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Very much enjoyed Nette , best of luck in the contest , Hugs Declan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 4:29 PM
Debs should love this. You really razzed up razzmatazz!!! Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Good work that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Good luck ..Thanks for the information left on my work..Karter is doing good...He is teething and having some gum pain..He is standing alone some almost ready to walk but not quite there..A week more maybe..Sara
Sivey Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 1:01 PM
I just love how you describe what a razzmatazz really is! Excellent way of telling us the truth behind the word! My favorite part of the poem has to be, "Razzmatazz of blue jazz, playing on ceilings" very awesome description of what the blues really are like! I thoroughly enjoyed the write that I have read this afternoon! I really love this poem that you have wrote here Nette! Great Work!!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Wonderful entry for the contest, Nette. You made the word come alive! I love it. Thank you for all your kind comments lately. Blessings, Rhonda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 12:36 PM
Oh, the picture is perfect, too!
Guzzi Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 11:50 AM
yes it is fine nette..using just one word was all that was needed and showing the beauty of language I never meant for it to generate humeous verse? Light & Love [I did do a blog saying I was not searching for a humerous verse either but apparently as usual most did not read either the contest reg's or the blog] Light & Love
Squyres Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Standing ovation !! Love the playfulness !!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 10:36 AM
well I am in a razzmatazz mood now Nette luv.. wonderful upbeat lines of pure enjoyment .. good luck in contest.. and oh speaking of spiders.. stay tuned for my next contest.. it will be a stinging success luv... oh..
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