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Razzmatazz

Razzmatazz is a rustle of drizzle hip hopping pops of baby raindrops June showers boogie on flowers with trails of dripping cloud tails Razzmatazz of blue jazz playing on ceilings ripples double in summer strolls! © Debbie Guzzi’s For Love of Language By nette onclaud

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/3/2012 1:32:00 AM

Wonderful write, Nette.Razzmatazz-nice choice of word,friend.Congratulations on your well deserved win..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2012 8:34:00 PM

ah yes Nette luv knew this would warrant big congrats .. so big congrats luv.. exceptional and extraordinary write .. as always luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2012 7:23:00 PM

BIG congrats. I see you won. I just knew Debs would love it!

Mike Dailey

Date: 4/2/2012 9:28:00 AM

Your poem cooled me off on a hot day. Congratulations on your win. Mike

Sidney Beck

Date: 4/2/2012 8:37:00 AM

excellent.....vastly superior to mine and others due to its clever internal rhyme and a host of other features....we're out of touch these days cos Too busy probably.....hope during the summer vacation t o renew ties huh? best regards as always young N

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest "For Love Of Language" Nette. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/2/2012 3:38:00 AM

Awsome Nette!!! Good luck in the contest...wonderful beat...big huggsss,love deb

The Situation

Date: 4/1/2012 8:22:00 PM

razzmatazz is perefect improvisation.

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 4/1/2012 5:04:00 PM

Very much enjoyed Nette , best of luck in the contest , Hugs Declan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2012 4:29:00 PM

Debs should love this. You really razzed up razzmatazz!!! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2012 3:05:00 PM

Good work that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Good luck ..Thanks for the information left on my work..Karter is doing good...He is teething and having some gum pain..He is standing alone some almost ready to walk but not quite there..A week more maybe..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/1/2012 1:01:00 PM

I just love how you describe what a razzmatazz really is! Excellent way of telling us the truth behind the word! My favorite part of the poem has to be, "Razzmatazz of blue jazz, playing on ceilings" very awesome description of what the blues really are like! I thoroughly enjoyed the write that I have read this afternoon! I really love this poem that you have wrote here Nette! Great Work!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/1/2012 12:35:00 PM

Wonderful entry for the contest, Nette. You made the word come alive! I love it. Thank you for all your kind comments lately. Blessings, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 4/1/2012 12:36:00 PM

Oh, the picture is perfect, too!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/1/2012 11:50:00 AM

yes it is fine nette..using just one word was all that was needed and showing the beauty of language I never meant for it to generate humeous verse? Light & Love [I did do a blog saying I was not searching for a humerous verse either but apparently as usual most did not read either the contest reg's or the blog] Light & Love

Debra Squyres

Date: 4/1/2012 10:36:00 AM

Standing ovation !! Love the playfulness !!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2012 10:36:00 AM

well I am in a razzmatazz mood now Nette luv.. wonderful upbeat lines of pure enjoyment .. good luck in contest.. and oh speaking of spiders.. stay tuned for my next contest.. it will be a stinging success luv... oh..