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Rays of Penetration


With ease, our nature's
Light, penetrates even the
Darkest of places



My entry into Raul's " Ascension " contest




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Sheol Moribund

November 28, 2009 at 9:43 AM

Hi James: I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading this poem, nicely done. Peace: Sheol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 27, 2009 at 11:45 AM

Congratulations James, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” haiku contest with this lovely haiku. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

November 26, 2009 at 11:25 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win!

Charmaine Chircop

November 26, 2009 at 3:00 AM

Congratulations,,well desrved win..indeed--Charma

Audrey Haick

November 25, 2009 at 7:13 PM

Excellent, as usual! Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Ascension" Contest

Audrey Haick

November 25, 2009 at 6:29 PM

Excellent Haiku! Wishing you good luck in Raul's "Ascension" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey N.B. Thank you for the comments!

Doris Culverhouse

November 25, 2009 at 12:26 PM

congrats on the placement!

November 24, 2009 at 3:03 PM

I really like the message of this poem the first time I read it and made me smile again. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing!! Karen

Carrie Richards

November 24, 2009 at 12:18 PM

This was a wonderful depiction of Raul's photo! Great job, James, congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie

Elaine George

November 24, 2009 at 4:02 AM

MAGNIFICENT HAIKU, JAMES. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LOVE, LAINIE

Brian Strand

November 24, 2009 at 3:42 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest James.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2009 at 3:36 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest James. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 23, 2009 at 9:49 PM

Well more congrats, James, on your winning poem in Raul's contest... sharing the same stage with u is such an honor for me... enjoy this win as your haiku is wonderful... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

November 23, 2009 at 9:38 PM

James, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

James Peranteau

November 21, 2009 at 7:00 PM

Even in the pits of ancient caves,...deep with in,...the light has dulled ancient paintings ! Great poem Mr. Fraser !!!! james

Carolyn Devonshire

November 21, 2009 at 7:47 AM

Lovely, uplifting poem. Nature does provide an ascension, taking us above "even the Darkest of places." Awesome write! Love you, Carolyn

November 20, 2009 at 12:49 PM

So much truth in your words. Much for the reader to think about in just three lines. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for all the comments. You made my day! Karen

Carrie Richards

November 20, 2009 at 8:59 AM

As only the heavens can provide! Well done, James. Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 20, 2009 at 4:27 AM

Ah, James! Human nature and God's Light... excellent poem with dual meaning. May God's blessings of health, strength, insight and your enlightenment continually be shared with others, through your beautiful words. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Joyce Johnson

November 19, 2009 at 11:49 PM

James, I think I have just run across the winner in the contest. Profound. Love, Joyce

Marty Owens

November 19, 2009 at 11:12 PM

Love your beautiful Haiku too...Shoot I love all of them...lol...Good luck in the contest...Marty

Barbara Gorelick

November 19, 2009 at 7:03 PM

Darn it, it think youll be a winner! smile...BG

James Marshall Goff

November 19, 2009 at 6:43 PM

very well done! James!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2009 at 5:27 PM

Super poem and much luck in Raul's contest... everyone seemed to want to enter this one and from the selections I've read .. Raul's got his hands full as they are all as terrific as your submission.. interesting how each poet sees the photo in a different pattern in their creative mind... thankxxx for sharing to night and for your kind and encouraging comments and input for my poetry... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"