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Ravishing River

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@@@@ @@@@@@@ V*V*V*V*V*V*V*V @@@ @ @@ The sweat that pours @@ @ @ @ from our sybaritic skin, @@@@ & @ Of which we bathe @@@@ @ in rivers of liquid love, @@@ @ ***** ***** @ Within pleasure domes @@@@ ( * ) ( * ) @ of promiscuous passions, @@@@@ @ You are my Aphrodite @@@@@ @ of carnal conception, @@@@@ * * @ An illicit immortal @@@@@ * of ostentatious ovulation, @@@@ <----> * With a presumptuous @@@@@ penetration I encroach... @@@@@@@ You’re flaunting fortress. @@@@@@@@@ @ @@@@@@@@ @ @@@@@@@@@ @ @@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@ @@@@ @ @@@ @ @ @@@@@@@ @ @@@@@@@ @ @@@@@@@@ @ @@@@@@@ @ @@@@@ @ @ * @@@@ @@@ @@@ @@@ @ @@ @ 45/45 Words June.02.2020 SOME KIND OF SENSUAL Sponsored by: nette onclaud Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/28/2020 12:57:00 PM

Hello Wined Warrior, wow! It must have taken a bit of time to do this shape. Enjoyed Have a nice day my friend. hugs.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 6/28/2020 9:38:00 AM

Well shaped,

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:54:00 PM

I don't know why I am blessed with a lot of sensual reads today and they sure are leaving up to their bidding. This is an exceptional work full of feminine grace, tender touch and the zenith of softness. Great work friend.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 9:18:00 AM

Wow! This is a creative masterpiece Wingster, especially loved the Aphrodite reference. Congratulations on your win :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/7/2020 8:54:00 AM

Are you entering through the gates of the fortress...or will you be climbing up and sneaking through a window...A very creative write

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2020 5:55:00 AM

Wow! How cool is this! Hugs...Kim

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/7/2020 3:05:00 AM

Wowsers! Wingster! A FAV immediately~ you beautiful poet and creative soul. Possibly in ny best FAVs Huggs, Pangie xoxo

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/7/2020 7:25:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, Pangi...for your support and the fav...^WW^ :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/6/2020 12:57:00 PM

... so creative, W.W. ... love it ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/6/2020 10:25:00 AM

This must be a win, sensual it is and WOW also - a superhero's perception of his Aphrodite. Hugs and blessings, Jennster.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2020 6:41:00 PM

Wow, nice... Linda

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/7/2020 7:29:00 AM

A beautiful face from the past, I see...thank you kindly for the wow, Linda...hope all is good my friend...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2020 5:42:00 PM

I add another WOW!! you are getting lots of them with this one!

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/5/2020 5:34:00 AM

Wow!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2020 10:15:00 PM

^WW^, you really show your great talent not only in verse ,but also shape.

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/4/2020 2:17:00 AM

Wow! What a poetic gem I found! A lovely treasure, indeed! Goodluck for the win!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/3/2020 11:39:00 PM

An awesome romantic poem, and an impressive entry for the contest. Good luck! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/3/2020 6:36:00 PM

Oh wow, WW! I am in awe of the beauty of your words and picture...a fave! xx Rhonda

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/4/2020 4:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Rhonda...for your support and fav my friend...^WW^ :o)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/3/2020 5:24:00 PM

This is quite sensuous WW. The warmth from intimate love glows red hot in this amazing piece! Relatable and beautiful! Blessings xxoo

Constance La France

Date: 6/3/2020 12:17:00 PM

WW, can I say WOW... this is amazing and if not a winner there is something wrong i the universe, a FAV for me _Constance

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/4/2020 4:58:00 AM

Thank you, dear Constance...for your support and fav my friend...^WW^ :o)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/3/2020 11:27:00 AM

What I love about liquid love is that you can drink it in. lovely poem dear w.w. xo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/3/2020 9:59:00 AM

Apex of sensuality my friend--a passionate write, WW. Hot!!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/3/2020 9:42:00 AM

a ravishing write indeed, love the alliteration and creative picture too - shame she's not smiling though!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/3/2020 5:19:00 AM

Volatile romantic verses dear friend, WW! Much enjoyed!

John Watt

Date: 6/2/2020 6:01:00 PM

That is some kind of sensual, Wingman! Great alliterations and nice work on the pic, too. Best wishes in the contest, my friend ~ John