Ravishing River

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  The sweat that pours                         @@ @      @               @  
   from our sybaritic skin,                 @@@@       &                  @
 Of which we bathe                        @@@@                              @
 in rivers of liquid love,                 @@@ @   *****        *****   @
Within pleasure domes                 @@@@      ( * )          ( * )     @
 of promiscuous passions,           @@@@@                                @
  You are my Aphrodite               @@@@@                               @
 of carnal conception,                  @@@@@            *  *           @
An illicit immortal                         @@@@@                           *
  of ostentatious ovulation,               @@@@        <---->       *
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    penetration I encroach...            @@@@@@@
 You’re flaunting fortress.             @@@@@@@@@
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                                                 June.02.2020
                                         SOME KIND OF SENSUAL
                                       Sponsored by: nette onclaud

                                           Placed 2'nd...Thank You

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/28/2020 12:57:00 PM
Hello Wined Warrior, wow! It must have taken a bit of time to do this shape. Enjoyed Have a nice day my friend. hugs.
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Date: 6/28/2020 9:38:00 AM
Well shaped,
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Date: 6/8/2020 8:54:00 PM
I don't know why I am blessed with a lot of sensual reads today and they sure are leaving up to their bidding. This is an exceptional work full of feminine grace, tender touch and the zenith of softness. Great work friend.
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:18:00 AM
Wow! This is a creative masterpiece Wingster, especially loved the Aphrodite reference. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 8:54:00 AM
Are you entering through the gates of the fortress...or will you be climbing up and sneaking through a window...A very creative write
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Date: 6/7/2020 5:55:00 AM
Wow! How cool is this! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 6/7/2020 3:05:00 AM
Wowsers! Wingster! A FAV immediately~ you beautiful poet and creative soul. Possibly in ny best FAVs Huggs, Pangie xoxo
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, Pangi...for your support and the fav...^WW^ :o)
Date: 6/6/2020 12:57:00 PM
... so creative, W.W. ... love it ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:25:00 AM
This must be a win, sensual it is and WOW also - a superhero's perception of his Aphrodite. Hugs and blessings, Jennster.
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Date: 6/5/2020 6:41:00 PM
Wow, nice... Linda
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:29:00 AM
A beautiful face from the past, I see...thank you kindly for the wow, Linda...hope all is good my friend...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
Date: 6/5/2020 5:42:00 PM
I add another WOW!! you are getting lots of them with this one!
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Date: 6/5/2020 5:34:00 AM
Wow!
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Date: 6/4/2020 10:15:00 PM
^WW^, you really show your great talent not only in verse ,but also shape.
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Date: 6/4/2020 2:17:00 AM
Wow! What a poetic gem I found! A lovely treasure, indeed! Goodluck for the win!
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Date: 6/3/2020 11:39:00 PM
An awesome romantic poem, and an impressive entry for the contest. Good luck! :)
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Date: 6/3/2020 6:36:00 PM
Oh wow, WW! I am in awe of the beauty of your words and picture...a fave! xx Rhonda
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Date: 6/4/2020 4:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Rhonda...for your support and fav my friend...^WW^ :o)
Date: 6/3/2020 5:24:00 PM
This is quite sensuous WW. The warmth from intimate love glows red hot in this amazing piece! Relatable and beautiful! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/3/2020 12:17:00 PM
WW, can I say WOW... this is amazing and if not a winner there is something wrong i the universe, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 6/4/2020 4:58:00 AM
Thank you, dear Constance...for your support and fav my friend...^WW^ :o)
Date: 6/3/2020 11:27:00 AM
What I love about liquid love is that you can drink it in. lovely poem dear w.w. xo
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Date: 6/3/2020 9:59:00 AM
Apex of sensuality my friend--a passionate write, WW. Hot!!
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Date: 6/3/2020 9:42:00 AM
a ravishing write indeed, love the alliteration and creative picture too - shame she's not smiling though!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/3/2020 5:19:00 AM
Volatile romantic verses dear friend, WW! Much enjoyed!
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Date: 6/2/2020 6:01:00 PM
That is some kind of sensual, Wingman! Great alliterations and nice work on the pic, too. Best wishes in the contest, my friend ~ John
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