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Raven's Redemption

As the night blackens around her,chilling her to the bone
She all but dies within herself,knowing what she's lost
Misery tempting her to fly upon that path unknown
With gilded wings to scattered light,she knows what this will cost
A weary duty Raven claims as something she's been shown

Her soul's in utter disarray,impossible pain in her heart
This loss of will she thinks is naught but inevitable fate
The earthly plane is but a stage and she has played her part
Revealing truth behind the scenes,what's begging her to wait?
The mist is twirling 'round her mind,the air is growing tart

Now with awareness feels the weight of metal in her palm
Crossed against her slender fingers damp with perspiration
Raven looks over the gravestones feeling somewhat calm
Needing answers,she's so lost,now wracked with hesitation
Quietly she finds herself reciting the twenty-third Psalm

Surely she now walks the valley,death there at the door
But strength is flowing into her from somewhere up above
Perhaps she'll feel His strength,not her angst anymore
Flooded with hope and inspiration,filling up with love
Warmed by angels now she dances,joyful to her core!




By Deb Wilson
* for contest "Among The Dead"
sponsored by A Rambling Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/27/2012 10:11:00 AM
Always love poems about crows or ravens.
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:02:00 PM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:19:00 AM
Many congratulations Deb on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:01:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your well deserved win in this contest of Constance.
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:40:00 AM
I really like the spiritual touch you added by having her recite the 23rd psalm, Deb. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:32:00 AM
Great story Deb. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:35:00 PM
Superb descriptiveness and rhyming in this work, Deb. I've come to expect this in each of your presentations. You did it again. Congratulations on your winning in Constance's contest.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your ninth place honor, Deb. Good job. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of constance, deb
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:56:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another great victory with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:35:00 AM
thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:30:00 PM
You have turned the dark, into light with this wonderful poem! Great Job !!! I think this will do very very well !! :)
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:17:00 PM
Deb, I admire the way you started out with all the doom and gloom the picture conveys and then had her dancing joyfully in heaven. Couldn't ask for a better ending. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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